Reviews from

My Teacher

Educated by the girl next door.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Terry Broxson
Exceptional
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LOL, very well done Harry. I do wonder who came up with the birds and needs as proxies for making, at least trying, to make babies. Great story, thank you for entering the contest. Terry.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you, again for the honor. Yes, I too wonder about the birds and bees.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Wow! Go Susie! What a thorough and informed teacher she was! I like the way she used references that an eleven-year-old boy (especially one about to go fishing!!) would understand: tadpoles. Still, though, she kept it clinical and informative and even explained about the love part, too! You education was wonderful!!

May this fly you into the winner's circle and buzz you into first place. (I bet you like my subtle birds-and-bee references there, don't you? I'm Susie 2.0.)

PS But I do have one little question, though: Your friend, Jack? Was his last name 'Doff?'

xoxox

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    I take it you knew some JDs. Actually, Susie could cause a dicky bird to pollinate like a bee.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 29-Mar-2024
reply by Rachelle Allen on 29-Mar-2024
    So much for the Hollywood Girl Next Door stereotype from YOUR neighborhood!! Susie suddenly makes me feel that you grew up in Harlem.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 29-Mar-2024
    And, no, no JD's around me. I seemed to attract the ones with a more foreign flair. Ones with names like Putd Himinmee.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    I would love to hear those magic words too bad you are hidden away in upper New York. I learned a lot from Susie's book.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    No, Soutside of Chicago.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 29-Mar-2024
    With flame-red hair, a person cannot ever be hidden away. Besides, what a WASTE that would be!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Could not agree more.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a delightful story and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best in the contest. I also wish for you a very nice Easter and may God bless you. Have a good day and God bless you. Patricia .

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thanks for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.
Comment from Mintybee
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This didn't go as I expected. Two kids sat down and read a book to get reliable facts. It was so straight-forward it was almost a twist. I'm glad you got accurate answers for those questions.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Yeah, books can be a big help. But the book is probably ban in Florida. Thanks for the read and feedback.