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Smell of Orchids

A sight of wonder

3 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a very beautiful and well written haiku poem about this very beautiful and very fragrant flower. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much! It's appreciated!
reply by Teri7 on 29-Mar-2024
    you are so welcome!
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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I like that you used the traditional/popular syllable count even though it wasn't required. Your subject was spot-on and the mental image of orchids was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Excellent
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Hello, Mystery Writer,
Thank you for sharing your haiku.
If I may, orchids exude a glorious fragrance as opposed to a "smell."
For your consideration:
"exuding a sweet fragrance"

Hoping I have not offended.

Best Wishes!
diane





 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    No I am not offended. In fact you gave me a great idea. The second line is changed. Thank you for your help and kind review!
reply by Mrs. KT on 29-Mar-2024
    My pleasure.

    Congratulations!
    diane
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you and you have helped me too! I'm glad to win first place!
reply by Mrs. KT on 29-Mar-2024
    Smiles all around, Raul!

    diane