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I'm hard to know

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Comment from lancellot
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This is very interesting poem. One where the subject looks in on themselves and sees the pain they have and the pain they bring to others. It also shows a person unwilling to heal or attempt change. A rare poem indeed.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

Comment from jessizero
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This poem was intense. I liked your descriptions, and I loved your rhymes. That last line was visceral. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024