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A gust of wind captures a kite.

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Comment from jessizero
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This was a cute little dialogue in poem form. You got the required syllable count correct, as well. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    Thank you.
Comment from locust
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A sweet and whimsical poem that captures the feeling of being a kid. There was no worse feeling than a lost kite! Thankfully your little girl has her dad there to help her :)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    Thank you, locust.