Tough Love
A haiku about issues revolving around a loved one2 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest fits the criteria for the number of syllables in three lines. This is also a first post by this author. Welcome to Fanstory! I enjoyed this Haiku even though it had a sad tone to it. I look forward to reading more from you. Good luck in the contest.
  |
This entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest fits the criteria for the number of syllables in three lines. This is also a first post by this author. Welcome to Fanstory! I enjoyed this Haiku even though it had a sad tone to it. I look forward to reading more from you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your 5-7-5 poem was great. The syllable count was correct. The message was heartbreaking, but it's good that you got an emotional response from the reader. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
|
Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your 5-7-5 poem was great. The syllable count was correct. The message was heartbreaking, but it's good that you got an emotional response from the reader. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
