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A Brief Piece About Writing

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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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It sure feels like that sometimes. This was a strong piece. Did you like "Ellie the Original Easter Bunny? I searced everywhere for a story about how bunnies got stuck delivering eggs, could find one, so, I wrote one. The picture alone is worth a look! Good writing. Karen

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, A Brief Piece about Writing, has the proper formatting and states that the burning in the mind must be directed out to the world and allowed to burn there.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

Comment from Sanku
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This is perfectly true .An idea takes shape in the mind and it glow for some time and then it flares up .then you have no choice but to write.. good metaphor..

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I haven't heard this song for a very long time. Thank you for sharing not only the contest entry, but the song with us. Yes, our muse often makes it impossible not to write. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Many thanks for your encouragement!
Comment from karenina
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Yes! The embers might seem to burn down to ash at times, but the muse breathes life again and we rejoice as we feel the intensity of a new flame!

Karenina

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Right now I have a fire burning and yearning to hear more of your words!
reply by karenina on 20-Mar-2024
    Thanks! I'll summon the muse!

    :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
    Your MUSE is MUSIC to my ears!
reply by karenina on 23-Mar-2024
    Awwww. You're the sweetest!
reply by karenina on 23-Mar-2024
    Clever! There's a poem in the making with this phrase!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
    You can use any of my words anytime you want!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
    And you're a great inspiration!
Comment from Daylily
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You have expressed perfectly how words and thoughts forge to the front of our burning minds insisting on having their way. To not be able to sit down and record them immediately is pure misery. This is my favorite of all your excellent postings, Jim. Smiles, Lily

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    I often have trouble communicating that which my heart wants me to. Have a blessed day!
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a lovely day and may God bless you always
....Patricia .

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Many thanks! God bless you and your loved ones!
Comment from Boogienights
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This is terriric! It really describes your passion for writing, in a way that the reader can understand. I feel a similar way, it brings me a lot of joy to create. A great contest entry, best of luck.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    You are a real winner and I'm glad to see you feel the same as I!