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Endangered Species

A Portrait of Nature

36 total reviews 
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Wow, thank you for this marvelous poem, Debbie. We go about our worldly work without being aware (sometimes) of the hazards we cause those creatures who are as entitled to life as we are -- poetry like this jewel raises awareness, and enough can't be said. Statistics tell us that we will lose between 0.01 to 0.1% of all species every year.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Deborah, for your kind and supportive review. As ever, I appreciate you. Take care Debbie
reply by Dawn Munro on 28-Mar-2024
    So sorry for the long delay! You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Heather Knight
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Even though it's impossible to pack much in these tiny poems, you've done very well and the notes are extremely interesting.
I'd never seen this mural/painting, but once you mentioned Warhol, I realised I should have guessed.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Maria for your time and kindness (with no reward)! I greatly appreciate you. Bless you. Debbie
reply by Heather Knight on 24-Mar-2024
    I've seen you've won. Congrats! I don't remember what place though.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Maria! Third place but the 10 dollars were much needed:))
Comment from Dimzdale1
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I enjoyed your play on words. It felt like you had to hold back with the limits of the contest. I would love to read how you would express this in your own personal writing style. Wishing you all the best.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review! Yes, being limited in this way is a good exercise but also frustrating:)) Take care Debbie
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Debbie,
This wonderful 5-7-5 expresses so much about the species disappearing from this world. How on earth can people ignore this fact? But they do, and the world keeps spinning.
Thank you for sharing and Good Luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Patty, for your very kind and supportive review which I greatly value! Take care Debbie
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem on the artistry of nature and the vulnerability of some of nature's creatures. I just watched a news item about the succvess of reintroducing the platypus into one of our National pars. Lovely presentation, Debbie,
cheers,
valda


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Valda, for your kind and thoughtful review, as ever, greatly appreciated! Take care Debbie
Comment from Boogienights
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I'd be very surprised if this doesn't win the contest. It's very well written and brings attention to endangered species. It's sad to think that one day they may be gone completely.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review which is greatly appreciated! Take care Debbie
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I think zoos are awful. Caging up animals. We are to blamewhen animals attack. They were here first. We encroach on their lands. We take and we kill. Boy, I need to climb down my soap box. Good work. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Karen, for your kind review! Nothing wrong with being on a soap box when there's so much stupidity around! Take care Debbie
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 21-Mar-2024
    U R Welcome
Comment from Mark Jackson
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Very good I don't know if this was a competition entry but I could see it winning a prize. I especially liked the final line Fragile Artistry. I always find the final line the hardest to write and feel it should be the strongest, yours was.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Mark, for your kind review, thoughts and best wishes, all much appreciated! Take care Debbie
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debbie,
It is so sad that so many animals are endangered mainly because man encroaches on their habitats to build homes or sometimes resorts.
We have lost so much to extinction and should work to lose no more.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Joan, for your kindness, support and best wishes! I greatly appreciate this. Take care Debbie
reply by dragonpoet on 21-Mar-2024
    You are most welcome on all accounts, Debbie.
    Joan
Comment from gramalot8
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Love the photo if all those marvelous creatures.
It is sad how many have been here, are extinct, endangered or how many soon will be. Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for this kind and thoughtful review, greatly appreciated! Take care Debbie