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Guess I Bit the Apple

Finding out about sex is sometimes confusing.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Excellent
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OMG!!! I am LOVING these contest entries. I haven't laughed this hard in...gosh, I don't know HOW long!!!

Yours, though, is beyond hysterical!!! OMG. I am still wiping tears away from my eyes.

Your have the best story-telling knack!! I simply could not have enjoyed this more. Thank you for the hilarity you have brought to my otherwise dull Wednesday night!!

Best of luck in the contest!
xo

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Rachelle! So glad that my story made you laugh.

    Best, RFL
reply by Rachelle Allen on 21-Mar-2024
    Oy, did it EVER!!!!!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Rachelle. And I am delighted that my entry along with others made you laugh. I thought this was a cool contest prompt.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 21-Mar-2024
    I agree! Lots of room for imagination - and, as it turned out, and this I did not expect - HILARITY!!
Comment from Kricket
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Love your story, and who's mom didn't keep the lessons from us? I'm glad you didn't have a "goldengwen" as it likely would have been a litter!

Fun recollection, great presentation. I look forward to getting to know your work!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for your positive review and that coveted six star!

    Best,
    RFL
Comment from Terry Broxson
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I'm sorry I'm out of sixes. I enjoyed your story. I do think there are millions who grew up the same way you did. Yes, those 50s were a bit different that what was to come. Thank you for entering the contest. Terry.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review! So glad you enjoyed my story. RFL
Comment from Julie Helms
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Someone needs to collect all the stories of how girls thought they got pregnant, before they knew the truth. I think it would be very diverse and pretty funny! Getting peed on is up there with pretty gross! Thanks for sharing your journey. Julie.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Julie, for your kind review!
Comment from jessizero
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This story was great for the prompt, and it was definitely very entertaining. I am so sorry your mother didn't enlighten you more. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your kind and positive review!