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To ponder is to dream

Haiku (sturdy oak supports)

4 total reviews 
Comment from June Sargent
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Some food for thought here. Pondering as clouds form images. Messages from above? I liked the message and the artwork. Great entry for the contest, Mark.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thanks June for your support. Often clouds have Rorschach meanings (-;

    Mark
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ciao!

I don't have an oak tree but I do love to lay down in the shade and watch the clouds drift by.

Let my thoughts wonder and often I dose off listening to the leaves rustling in the breeze.

I'm a simple lass and I'm happy just basking in Mother Nature gentle embrace.

I love the pic , the hues and the carefree vibe you created.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Thanks for your review. Honestly, it was Karenina?s recent post, mentioned in my author?s note, that was my inspiration for my short poem. She encouraged me to post it.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Thanks for your review. Honestly, it was Karenina?s recent post, mentioned in my author?s note, that was my inspiration for my short poem. She encouraged me to post it.
reply by tempeste on 18-Mar-2024
    Ciao , you now have 4 votes!

    Best of luck ! 🍀
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I often take a picnic in the park and sit under an oak tree in the summer and read my book, your poem reminded me of last summer in England here, a fine post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Pervhance chance to dream about those wondrous summer days with a book in your lap - worth remembering for sure.

    Thanks Dolly for your review. Do check out my author notes to see what inspired my poem post.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I thought I'd reviewed this one but understand now. I love it. So peaceful and dreamy. We have, on the one hand, nature's physical strength and, on the other, the transient nature of those clouds, fueling the imagination. A perfect combination, ideal for this format! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Debbie,

    Thanks for your review. Do check out my author notes to see what inspired my contest entry.
reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 16-Mar-2024
    Yes, I reviewed Karenina's. I remember now.