Dystopia to Utopia - Opening
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
It reads like a term paper. Grammatically correct, but stilted.
To be persuasive here on FanStory, the piece should probably have included examples and a few anecdotal warnings. Omitting the 'Community Management flow chart would help readers ease into your paper.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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It reads like a term paper. Grammatically correct, but stilted.
To be persuasive here on FanStory, the piece should probably have included examples and a few anecdotal warnings. Omitting the 'Community Management flow chart would help readers ease into your paper.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thanks...John
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is very interesting. Your analysis offers valuable insights into the challenges and possibilities of shaping the future of society. I like how you encourage us to examine existing structures. And the positivity of the possibility of more equitable alternatives. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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This is very interesting. Your analysis offers valuable insights into the challenges and possibilities of shaping the future of society. I like how you encourage us to examine existing structures. And the positivity of the possibility of more equitable alternatives. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Many thanks
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a very good post. Your informative piece on the differences between "Dystopia to Utopia" is eye opening. Reading this definitely points a finger to where our society is today. Good informative post.
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This is a very good post. Your informative piece on the differences between "Dystopia to Utopia" is eye opening. Reading this definitely points a finger to where our society is today. Good informative post.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
I put Putin in the same category as Hitler, but I don't know if Trump belongs up that far. Just my humble opinion. As always, your writings are full of fact and very well organized to prove a strong point.
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I put Putin in the same category as Hitler, but I don't know if Trump belongs up that far. Just my humble opinion. As always, your writings are full of fact and very well organized to prove a strong point.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
