Poetry Pleasure
I love writing poems! What else can I say!19 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I am glad you let the poem lead you where you needed to take your words. A wonderful celebration of your relationship with words, a verse we can all relate to. A good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I am glad you let the poem lead you where you needed to take your words. A wonderful celebration of your relationship with words, a verse we can all relate to. A good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for the kind review Ginda!
Comment from Mark Jackson
Ooo, I like that. My yearning paper, very strong. Dripped from my mouth onto my eager fingers, also strong. My only food for thought is to say that you start by saying the words were there deep inside. So I would say you are one and the same. Later you go on to say you became one and the same. A minor point that did not stop you earning 5 stars.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Ooo, I like that. My yearning paper, very strong. Dripped from my mouth onto my eager fingers, also strong. My only food for thought is to say that you start by saying the words were there deep inside. So I would say you are one and the same. Later you go on to say you became one and the same. A minor point that did not stop you earning 5 stars.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the great feedback Mark!
Comment from bob cullen
Let me say firstly, generally I don't rate free verse, but this one caught my eye. I really liked how this flowed, it was smooth and delivered a readable message. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Let me say firstly, generally I don't rate free verse, but this one caught my eye. I really liked how this flowed, it was smooth and delivered a readable message. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from jessizero
I like it, too! The only word I can think of to describe this is "frantic." I mean that in the best way possible. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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I like it, too! The only word I can think of to describe this is "frantic." I mean that in the best way possible. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Jessi! Thanks for reading and enjoying my poems!
Comment from pome lover
well, if your talent is as great as your enthusiasm, you should win lots of contests and entertain us mightily. Doesn't sound like you will get much sleep, though, with your verse constantly presenting itself.
I'm teasing you. Writing poetry IS fun. Enjoy.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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well, if your talent is as great as your enthusiasm, you should win lots of contests and entertain us mightily. Doesn't sound like you will get much sleep, though, with your verse constantly presenting itself.
I'm teasing you. Writing poetry IS fun. Enjoy.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much and I love your comments! Haha!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Even death won't end us. What a powerful statement. I agree poetry is addicting. Whether writing or reading poetry the truth will set you free. I love the artwork's way of putting the words on the screen.
Thanks for sharing this positive and uplifting piece with us. I hope your words inspire others to write poetry for the love of writing it.
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Even death won't end us. What a powerful statement. I agree poetry is addicting. Whether writing or reading poetry the truth will set you free. I love the artwork's way of putting the words on the screen.
Thanks for sharing this positive and uplifting piece with us. I hope your words inspire others to write poetry for the love of writing it.
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much Jesse!
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You're welcome, Jodi.
Comment from estory
I thought this poem really interesting, quite imaginative in construction and style. I liked how the words just seemed to be so spontaneous, full of personality, and the cadances were just like a dance of language. The philosophy behind it is also quite compelling; this idea of poetry just taking a hold of you and becoming something alive and inseparable, a part of the soul. It is timeless. It is horizonless. This type of prose like form I first came across in Jack Anderson. I wonder if you have read him. If not, I would suggest The Clouds of That Country, and poems like Meditation on Christian Science Reading Rooms, The Mysterious Sound, and Cafeterias, or the Pencil. This is an exciting kind of poetry. estory
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I thought this poem really interesting, quite imaginative in construction and style. I liked how the words just seemed to be so spontaneous, full of personality, and the cadances were just like a dance of language. The philosophy behind it is also quite compelling; this idea of poetry just taking a hold of you and becoming something alive and inseparable, a part of the soul. It is timeless. It is horizonless. This type of prose like form I first came across in Jack Anderson. I wonder if you have read him. If not, I would suggest The Clouds of That Country, and poems like Meditation on Christian Science Reading Rooms, The Mysterious Sound, and Cafeterias, or the Pencil. This is an exciting kind of poetry. estory
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Oh my gosh! You made me so happy with your amazing review!
Honestly I tweaked this poem so much that I didn?t know which direction I was actually going to take with it. Thanks again estory!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Free Verse poetry Contest. A personal, yet accurate for many, account of what it is to be a poet. It is a release unlike any other. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the Free Verse poetry Contest. A personal, yet accurate for many, account of what it is to be a poet. It is a release unlike any other. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! I?m kinda new at poetry, but I?ve now found my passion!
Comment from karenina
Yes---but how do you REALLY feel? (Smile)
Nobody can doubt that you haven't been swept up in the ardor of this genre!
(Is it warm in here or is it your undertone?)
It's fun! If not passionate and zealous about writing, what would be the point?
Original and zesty!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Yes---but how do you REALLY feel? (Smile)
Nobody can doubt that you haven't been swept up in the ardor of this genre!
(Is it warm in here or is it your undertone?)
It's fun! If not passionate and zealous about writing, what would be the point?
Original and zesty!
Karenina
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the "hot" review!
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Whew! I'm wishing my muse would step it up a notch!
LOL
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed your contest entry, which explains how poetry overtook you and claimed you permanently. There's a nice rhythm to the flow of your words. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed your contest entry, which explains how poetry overtook you and claimed you permanently. There's a nice rhythm to the flow of your words. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for the kind review Verna!