Spilled milk
Humor,14 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Clever short piece - with a witty expression in the last line. Your short poem relates to all situations of life, where accidents happen, butwe can't control or change anything, and we have to just "clear it up" and move on, without getting too upset.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Clever short piece - with a witty expression in the last line. Your short poem relates to all situations of life, where accidents happen, butwe can't control or change anything, and we have to just "clear it up" and move on, without getting too upset.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your poem very much. It had the syllable count correct, and the sentiment was hilarious. I loved your use of "moo." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed your poem very much. It had the syllable count correct, and the sentiment was hilarious. I loved your use of "moo." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you for stopping by and reviewing my work and I?m glad chuckle from it,
Comment from Kristen Rose Ulrich
This is such a cute poem. I like how you played on the word, "moved" by saying, "mooed." It is very clever! Good job! I will not cry over spilled milk!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This is such a cute poem. I like how you played on the word, "moved" by saying, "mooed." It is very clever! Good job! I will not cry over spilled milk!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. I really did have a fun time writing this with the play on words.
Comment from karenina
LOL. Now that's cute! I wonder how many (hundreds of) glasses of spilled milk I've mopped up over the decades, between my own kids and now my grandkids! This could be a "cow" riddle!
It's these cute ones that get me chuckling!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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LOL. Now that's cute! I wonder how many (hundreds of) glasses of spilled milk I've mopped up over the decades, between my own kids and now my grandkids! This could be a "cow" riddle!
It's these cute ones that get me chuckling!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review I appreciate
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Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in order for this contest. Good picture to compliment the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This is a well-written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in order for this contest. Good picture to compliment the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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It always encourages me to have such nice reviews as is. Thank you so much.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is perfect entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. I love this poem and wish I had a 6 star left to give it. The last line is just fantastic. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This is perfect entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. I love this poem and wish I had a 6 star left to give it. The last line is just fantastic. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for a very nice review. I appreciate it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This short, sweet poem got a smile from me. I loved the play on words, 'moo'ed'. Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading adn wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This short, sweet poem got a smile from me. I loved the play on words, 'moo'ed'. Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading adn wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and leave me such a nice comment
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Thanks for taking that adage and making it to a funny poem. I liked the "moo'ed" to tears. I guess you are in the mood for some jokes as April approaches!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Lol. Thanks for taking that adage and making it to a funny poem. I liked the "moo'ed" to tears. I guess you are in the mood for some jokes as April approaches!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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As always, I wish to thank you for a very nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever and witty post Patricia, I can't help thinking that the middle line should read: (Over a glass of (spilt) Milk). Love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This is a clever and witty post Patricia, I can't help thinking that the middle line should read: (Over a glass of (spilt) Milk). Love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it very much. I changed the word to spilt I had considered it before I put it up to different way.
Comment from jim vecchio
Are you trying to tell worse puns than me? If so, I can cream you! That's udder nonsense! I hope your minister doesn't read this. Suppose he saw it with his Pastor Eyes? Hope you win the bottle for top place!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Are you trying to tell worse puns than me? If so, I can cream you! That's udder nonsense! I hope your minister doesn't read this. Suppose he saw it with his Pastor Eyes? Hope you win the bottle for top place!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing my work. I appreciate it very much.
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I always appreciate your work!
