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a poem about looking for something more2 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Free Form Poetry contest and a good first post. Welcome to Fanstory! This was a strong poem with descriptions that take the reader on a journey. I really liked the last line as the ending of this poem. Hope to read more of your writing.Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the Free Form Poetry contest and a good first post. Welcome to Fanstory! This was a strong poem with descriptions that take the reader on a journey. I really liked the last line as the ending of this poem. Hope to read more of your writing.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
Comment from Nicki Hayes
Welcome!Great first poem! I really adore the deep soul poetry. It tells me so much about a person I do not know. I appreciate the words you've chosen and the meter of it. I am very familiar with the feeling it brought in me, and I'm pretty sure you and I are friends. I'm giving this 6 stars cause I feel it so much. Great job!
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Welcome!Great first poem! I really adore the deep soul poetry. It tells me so much about a person I do not know. I appreciate the words you've chosen and the meter of it. I am very familiar with the feeling it brought in me, and I'm pretty sure you and I are friends. I'm giving this 6 stars cause I feel it so much. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
