Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Living on the Edge - Chap 13"The blending of good and evil.
16 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Oh I think they both have, lost their hearts, I mean. I.love the the way you make room for some tenderness amidst all the actions. It's a great story, Carol. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Oh I think they both have, lost their hearts, I mean. I.love the the way you make room for some tenderness amidst all the actions. It's a great story, Carol. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you...Romance and sweetness is good for the heart. I can't really have full out relationships but I can hint. Thank you for enjoying! I haven't written for a few days so you are almost caught up. Can't believe you gave me so much of your time. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Terry Broxson
Carol, another good chapter and you are moving along the story nicely. I am wondering how Frank will let all this play out. You got good characters and conflict drama going on with everybody. Excellent. Terry.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Carol, another good chapter and you are moving along the story nicely. I am wondering how Frank will let all this play out. You got good characters and conflict drama going on with everybody. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Frank always has his finger in the pie in one way or another. Thank you again for reading and enjoying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Another great chapter that covers all the bases, even a little smackie mouth to ramp up the fun. LOL. And as always, you've left us readers anxious to get to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Another great chapter that covers all the bases, even a little smackie mouth to ramp up the fun. LOL. And as always, you've left us readers anxious to get to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Good morning and thank you. I really am excited to see what you think of the next chapter. I don't have the skills of Tucker, but I hope at least to have entertained.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Your outstanding skills far surpass anything I can deliver in Tucker. :-)
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You are far too modest! I fear I've lost my touch of filling in the surrounds and the background like you and others do so well. Everyone is telling me to publish this one. Though I love it, I feel it needs more between the lines.
Smiles, Carol
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This one should definitely be published. As I once read: writers who seek perfection, leave manuscripts in a drawer.
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Man! Do I have plenty!!!
Comment from Wendy G
A super chapter, and well written. Alyssa 's relationship with Troy will plummet when she regains her memory. And Layla - like her sister she's a bit impetuous and naive, and she doesn't really understand the danger, which will complicate things for Jake.
I am enjoying this a lot, and I am pleased to see another chapter waiting for me.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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A super chapter, and well written. Alyssa 's relationship with Troy will plummet when she regains her memory. And Layla - like her sister she's a bit impetuous and naive, and she doesn't really understand the danger, which will complicate things for Jake.
I am enjoying this a lot, and I am pleased to see another chapter waiting for me.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Layla's works in a cutthroat environment in the fashion industry, but she has no idea how the underworld and the crime really work. They don't decide things at a boardroom table or at dinner. They get rid of what they don't want!
Smiles and thank you,
Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Geez louise! You just keep revving it up. You are delivering at the speed of sound. I wonder what the inside of you brain looks like. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Geez louise! You just keep revving it up. You are delivering at the speed of sound. I wonder what the inside of you brain looks like. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Probably mush mixed with a variety of cobwebs!!!
Thanks so much again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
These female characters not only in your book but in others books on this site are frustrating. I'm with Jake - no mixing business with pleasure especially when people could get killed. I'm surprised at Layla flirting this way when she should be focused on finding Alyssa.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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These female characters not only in your book but in others books on this site are frustrating. I'm with Jake - no mixing business with pleasure especially when people could get killed. I'm surprised at Layla flirting this way when she should be focused on finding Alyssa.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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In all fairness to Layla, I don't think she was even fully conscious of her actions. She'd been riding a high with her success, dumped Ryan, witnessed her sister either abducted or murdered, and got involved in stuff way over her head. I thought of it as a need to lean on someone for their strength... But she unwittingly puts herself in the line of fire.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It sounds as if a lot of people are going to make sure Jake and Layla don't see the next day. I hope there are more people trying to keep them alive. Your story is going very well.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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It sounds as if a lot of people are going to make sure Jake and Layla don't see the next day. I hope there are more people trying to keep them alive. Your story is going very well.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Carol
Yes, I hope Jake had a back up plan and there's always Frankie's crew too, I think they were at the party too!
Smiles, Carol
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Are you getting any sleep?
Comment from Esther Brown
I love the way this is working out. You keep adding dimension to the story as it develops. Do you write "seat of the pants" style or do you use an outline? I am impressed.
Esther
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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I love the way this is working out. You keep adding dimension to the story as it develops. Do you write "seat of the pants" style or do you use an outline? I am impressed.
Esther
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Good morning!
A little of both.... I have an idea and I write a list of how things should unfold.... then I write...My characters take over and things change as I go...so the outline changes too. To me, the story owns itself.
You are so gracious to give me one of your gold stars. I truly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
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The only fiction I have posted is called the Other Woman. It was more like writing only one chapter of a book.
Today I have to work....not play on the computer, so check in later. Smiles back. E
Comment from karenina
Roses and lollipops (or a knife) --they're on their way to love! This is starting to wind up and I'm already missing it. I guess that makes it official... I'm a huge fan and love your way with words! Hmmm. What happens when she gets her memory back? Oh--okay, I'll wait! (smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Roses and lollipops (or a knife) --they're on their way to love! This is starting to wind up and I'm already missing it. I guess that makes it official... I'm a huge fan and love your way with words! Hmmm. What happens when she gets her memory back? Oh--okay, I'll wait! (smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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It's not over yet.... but I bet I have you screaming when you read the next chapter I'll be posting in a few. It's a good one.
Smiles, Carol
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Oh, man! I have to make dinner! Post away and I'll do my best to sign back on later!
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It won't let me post anyway. Says 24 hrs. so I have to see when I posted yesterday. But it's ready. Enjoy dinner!
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Whew. I delayed just in case...
Okay then, later!
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Now it let me post it! So it will be waiting!
Enjoy!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, love is in the air on all fronts, both sisters are enjoying some side romance, as one tries to remember and the other one to forget. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Wow, love is in the air on all fronts, both sisters are enjoying some side romance, as one tries to remember and the other one to forget. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you Iza. How wonderful of you to read my story and to bless me with the stars. I thank you so much.
Don't miss the next chapter... all the crime stuff goes down!
Smiles, Carol