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Me Mam

May God bless and love her

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Comment from Deborah Dybowski
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You have written a lovely poem honoring your mother. You sweetly describe her voice as sweeter than that of a nightingale. She sounds
like she was a wonderful mom. You are truly blessed to have had her
to guide you to becoming a good man.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Deborah.
    John x
reply by Deborah Dybowski on 24-Mar-2024
Comment from jessizero
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I am so sorry for your loss. This seems to be a great tribute to someone very special. Your words flowed beautifully. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Jessi.
    John x
Comment from karenina
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Her eyes and lips smile in unison. I see a light there that must have been a joy to all who loved her, and all whom she loved. My deepest condolences to you. What a blessing to have her here, brightening life, for 91 beautiful years!

Karenina

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Karenina.
    John x
reply by karenina on 23-Mar-2024
    You are very welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a wonderful tribute to your Mother, so touching and gentle and I am so sorry for your loss, she sounds like a wonderful person and she will be greatly missed by you and her family, I enjoyed your fine poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Dolly.
    John x
Comment from Begin Again
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Please accept my condolences for your loss. My mom passed seven years ago and sometimes it still feels like yesterday. Our talks, her smile, and her love will always remain my foundation. You wrote a beautiful poem in tribute to your Mom. I am sure she is smiling.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Carol.
    John x
Comment from teafor2
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Lordinajamjar, an excellent list poem/elegy/eulogy...This sequenced post
flows lovingly, longingly & lastingly down the page as loved ones, friends,
associates bid farewells and goodbyes. More a celebration of the deceased
life than a somber send off. Well written and hopefully, cathartic. teafor2

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Tea.
    John x
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi John,
Sorry for your loss,
This is a nicely written ode to your mother. She sounds like a wonderful and strong woman. She is probably singing with her fellow angels now.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Joan.
    John x
reply by dragonpoet on 22-Mar-2024
    You?re welcome, John.
    Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Such a lovely tribute to your mother. I lost mine last April at the age of 98. I'm not sure when it gets easier. I am still waiting. But writing things like this is a good way to honor and remember them. I have to believe that she sees the words and is smiling. Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn.
    John x
Comment from shelley kaye
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sorry for your loss - you must have had a good relationship

this poem was a beautiful tribute... maybe print it out and make a collage of her life on a posterboard...

anyway, a wonderful poem with smooth flow and rhyme
thank you for sharing
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Shelley
    John x
Comment from Jessica Moore1
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This is a very beautiful tribute to your mother. I think it is great that you honored her with something that's timeless as writing. I may not have actually known or met her but I feel like I know who she is after reading this. I'm sure she was a great lady and I am sorry for your loss.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Jessica.
    John x