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>Liars

A tough November choice.

18 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well said, Paul! Love your limerick which perfectly fits the Party Pooper prompt! You cut through the sham with your incisive sentiments and, basically, sum up the election. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the review, Debbie. I didn't do well at all in the contest. I hate to admit it, but my strong point is dirty limericks.
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    Hope this arrives ok. My computer is having a wobbly at the moment.)
    No shame in that. I love dirty limericks! Never dirty enough for me:))
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I would not want to be an American when the next election is held, and your limerick explains succinctly why -- I should think there would be far more (overall) qualified folks to run. *sigh* Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    We are going to find out who is the better liar.
reply by Dawn Munro on 13-Mar-2024
    :(
Comment from jaded831
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In my mind it's easy to choose. Trump is all about hate. Trashes Biden at every turn. Biden is more about love for people and democracy. Trump has a warped sense of democracy. God is about love, think about it.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the review, jaded. Biden's state of the union address had very little to do with the state of the union. He spent plenty of time bashing Trump. They are both liars.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Can not argue with this. We are besieged by elderly fools who are so full of themselves that they bloat.

Is asking for a president under 60 too much?
D

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the review, Doug. I think under 60 would be a good idea.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick, Liars, has the proper formatting and suggests that politicians lie. That might be hard to prove because ... uh, never mind. Liars!!...................

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the review, Bill. Never mind is right.
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a very good Limerick poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your rhyming scheme for this contest is on point for this contest. Very nice complimentary picture.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thanks, BB. Maybe we'll have a better choice in 2028.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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So far, we really don't have a decent choice for president this year. I keep praying that somebody will come forward and we will actually have a choice. It's scary to me what America has come down too. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Barb. I'm scared, too.
Comment from jenintorre
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Hi Paul
I think you have summed up the political situation in very few few words.
This is a great entry for the competition.
I wish you lots of luck. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Jen. That is one profession that I would not like to be in.
Comment from Aussie
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Hi, Paul. A good entry for the Party Pooper contest entry. It says a lot without naming names. The fighting is fierce, old yellar' plays dirty. Showing all the photos of Biden when he has fallen, that is below the belt! And so was Hitler. K xx

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Kay. This is going to be an interesting election.
reply by Aussie on 16-Mar-2024
    They all have their hands in the till.
Comment from Wendy G
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Excellent limerick and you have summed up the feelings of many Americans very well. It's a pity there is no alternative party and leader. It's not going to be easy to vote for either one of these.
Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Wendy. I don't know if there are any politicians who are not liars.