thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Election 2024"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
4 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
I hope it will not be the one that I choose as well. Elections this year are going to be a real struggle for the voter. In your third line down, you wrote one will lose and you instead of saying lose you were broke loose so you need to take it Out of the word loose Patricia
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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I hope it will not be the one that I choose as well. Elections this year are going to be a real struggle for the voter. In your third line down, you wrote one will lose and you instead of saying lose you were broke loose so you need to take it Out of the word loose Patricia
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and pointing out my mistake, I appreciate it. I agree it will be a struggle for voters this year. I am just trusting in God. He has a plan for this world and all the people in it.I hope you have as good day.
Comment from S_Magz
Simple. Relatable.
I like the simplicity of the poem. It feels like "a thought for the day", which I really appreciate. I do not know what you mean by "loose", if you have any other meaning to that other than the opposite of "win". If it is, then the word should be "lose".
If I interpret it otherwise, please correct me.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Simple. Relatable.
I like the simplicity of the poem. It feels like "a thought for the day", which I really appreciate. I do not know what you mean by "loose", if you have any other meaning to that other than the opposite of "win". If it is, then the word should be "lose".
If I interpret it otherwise, please correct me.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you for tour review and yes, I did not mean to put two os in it. I went back and fixed it. Hope you have a good day.
Comment from mrsmajor
Good entry for the contest, s.m.kirby, but for me, it makes no difference who wins..
There's only one master of this old lady's heart, and He needs no vote...He's Alive and well, always...Guess Who?
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Good entry for the contest, s.m.kirby, but for me, it makes no difference who wins..
There's only one master of this old lady's heart, and He needs no vote...He's Alive and well, always...Guess Who?
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Victoria, thank you so much for your review. I do appreciate it. I like you am not too concerned about who will win. I believe The Master of the world is still in control. I just keep looking up. He may come back any day. I hope you have a great day Sandra
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You're very welcome, indeed He's still in control, and one day we will all enjoy His wonders...
Have a Wonderful Day
Hugs!
Victoria
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A nice entry for the Party Pooper contest. The last line gave me a bit of a chill. What will be will be is terrifying LOL. Good job. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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A nice entry for the Party Pooper contest. The last line gave me a bit of a chill. What will be will be is terrifying LOL. Good job. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. I'm not worried about it. God is still in control no matter who wins. Hope you have a good day.