The Perchoo
A love poem just for fun.18 total reviews
Comment from Natureschild
This is such a lovely love story in the blue forest. I enjoyed the rhyming couplets and the form you crafted. I find the second stanza a bit confusing because the imagery is unclear. - Terry
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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This is such a lovely love story in the blue forest. I enjoyed the rhyming couplets and the form you crafted. I find the second stanza a bit confusing because the imagery is unclear. - Terry
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Chloe Tully
Wow, great poem I loved it. Nice rhyming and word choice overall I loved it great job keep up the great work can't wait to see what else you have
Chloe
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Wow, great poem I loved it. Nice rhyming and word choice overall I loved it great job keep up the great work can't wait to see what else you have
Chloe
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Heather Bagley
I love the fast-pace flow of this poem, and the slight fantasy feel to it all. The rhymes are clever and don't sound forced in the slightest. I like the play on the term "mourning" dove, with the whole melancholy tone of the piece.
~Heather
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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I love the fast-pace flow of this poem, and the slight fantasy feel to it all. The rhymes are clever and don't sound forced in the slightest. I like the play on the term "mourning" dove, with the whole melancholy tone of the piece.
~Heather
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Oh, thank you so much. Not everyone picks up on that.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written poem my friend, this articulate work is a pleasure to read. The generally aabb rhymed Tetrametic narrative. You've written a nicely flowing poem, pleasing the heart and soul, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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A beautifully written poem my friend, this articulate work is a pleasure to read. The generally aabb rhymed Tetrametic narrative. You've written a nicely flowing poem, pleasing the heart and soul, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Awe, thank you so much for the thoughtful review.
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Welcome
Comment from Bryce 1
What a beautiful and enchanting read. It rhymes so well and I am carried through to the end without a hitch. Thank you for this. It's poems like this that keep me inspired.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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What a beautiful and enchanting read. It rhymes so well and I am carried through to the end without a hitch. Thank you for this. It's poems like this that keep me inspired.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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That is so encouraging to read. I appreciate your kind review and I am glad you liked my poem.
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Oh, also, I was going to mention...
And this is not meant to be a ploy for you to read more of my writings, but you might check out my poem Melancholy Moon, it is similar to this one as far as imagery and flow. When I get such lovely reviews I make it a point to read some of the reviewers work. I am anxious to look at your portfolio. Thanks again for your review. It is reviews like yours that keep me encouraged and motivated to continue to share.
Glenda :-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love Mourning Doves. I'm a very visual person so I really appreciate your exceptional word imagery. The presentation is very pretty.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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I love Mourning Doves. I'm a very visual person so I really appreciate your exceptional word imagery. The presentation is very pretty.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Taking presentation tips from you ;-), if you couldn't tell. Hope it's flattering and not annoying!
Thanks again, have a blessed day my friend.
Glenda
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Yes I noticed, I'm honored. Thank you.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is so beautiful, a reflection of the sounds and songs of nature that are so joyful and yet, we often miss them. You remind us of their beauty and their purpose, both divinely created.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is so beautiful, a reflection of the sounds and songs of nature that are so joyful and yet, we often miss them. You remind us of their beauty and their purpose, both divinely created.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Oh, thank you so much Ginda. I enjoyed writing this poem. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the six stars-I am honored.
Blessings-
Glenda
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
What a lovely, cute poem! It is sweet with the subject of the doves cooing and then searching for each other, in the moonlight. Sweet picture too! Great job with this!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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What a lovely, cute poem! It is sweet with the subject of the doves cooing and then searching for each other, in the moonlight. Sweet picture too! Great job with this!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write.
Glenda
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I adore doves. This poem tells a story with well chosen words and descriptions that create nice visuals for the reader. I did find one typo that you will want to correct. (Rejoincing, the songs join with aplomb) The word rejoice is misspelled. Very nicely written and the art work adds alot to the poem as well.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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I adore doves. This poem tells a story with well chosen words and descriptions that create nice visuals for the reader. I did find one typo that you will want to correct. (Rejoincing, the songs join with aplomb) The word rejoice is misspelled. Very nicely written and the art work adds alot to the poem as well.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Each stanza connects well with the next. Your last two lines stood out to me. Nature has a way of bringing species together. Very nice poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Each stanza connects well with the next. Your last two lines stood out to me. Nature has a way of bringing species together. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
