Cold Winter Day
The sun was casting rays from behind a small cloud3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jeano.
This is a nice concise ode to Winter. It describes all the happenings of the season. It looks like the ice is finally melting on some of the water.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope this did well in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S Hope you and yours are happy and healthy.
I would like to let you know that I just published a book titled,
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is
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Hi Jeano.
This is a nice concise ode to Winter. It describes all the happenings of the season. It looks like the ice is finally melting on some of the water.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope this did well in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S Hope you and yours are happy and healthy.
I would like to let you know that I just published a book titled,
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is
available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the
bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon and
search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. Each line of your poem connects well with the next. Your picture compliments the poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this writing prompt. Each line of your poem connects well with the next. Your picture compliments the poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.
Comment from RodG
Your poem describes Winter succinctly by mentioning all the elements we can expect to see. The sun usually does hide and water is almost always frozen. Rod
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Your poem describes Winter succinctly by mentioning all the elements we can expect to see. The sun usually does hide and water is almost always frozen. Rod
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and comments.