Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Living On The Edge - Chap 9"The blending of good and evil.
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Comment from Ulla
I have fallen behind, Carol, but I'm now trying to catch up. I have so many friends inviting me out at the moment moment, but the next couple of days are quiet, leaving behind to catch up with my own writing as well. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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I have fallen behind, Carol, but I'm now trying to catch up. I have so many friends inviting me out at the moment moment, but the next couple of days are quiet, leaving behind to catch up with my own writing as well. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Go and have fun with your friends, my dear. The story will be here and waiting. Closing in on the end soon....I think. Thank you so much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. There is one small edit. "You shouldn't be her(e) alone." I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. There is one small edit. "You shouldn't be her(e) alone." I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thanks for pointing out that missing e....It probably went out for coffee or something. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
So close, yet so far and now having the same fate as Ally. It's so sad to see the women are just discardable material for the machos on the street. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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So close, yet so far and now having the same fate as Ally. It's so sad to see the women are just discardable material for the machos on the street. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you Iza for reading the other chapters. That is so very kind of you. I hope you enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This chapter is filled with action and excitement. You do a marvelous job with this type of story. I'm glad you are a fast writer so I don't have to wait long between chapters.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This chapter is filled with action and excitement. You do a marvelous job with this type of story. I'm glad you are a fast writer so I don't have to wait long between chapters.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Hello, April
Your next chapter will kind of give you a recap of who is who and what's going on...Just in case you missed something. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I am waiting for Sunday with bated breath so I can give you the six you so richly deserve. I will have you know that no matter how full my boxes are, I dig you out first. If Ric myWorld were writing these days, you would have competition. I have been reading since the age of three. That's 65 years of reading. Due to my health, I never really got to work as much as I wanted, and I sure miss it. So, I've never really had money, but, I had libraries. They can take you everywhere. Keep writing. Please. Karen
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I am waiting for Sunday with bated breath so I can give you the six you so richly deserve. I will have you know that no matter how full my boxes are, I dig you out first. If Ric myWorld were writing these days, you would have competition. I have been reading since the age of three. That's 65 years of reading. Due to my health, I never really got to work as much as I wanted, and I sure miss it. So, I've never really had money, but, I had libraries. They can take you everywhere. Keep writing. Please. Karen
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I've wrote or read for as long as I can remember too, And yes, Ric is one of my favorite people. He's a sweetheart for sure. I love his Tucker stories. I just finished writing Chapter 11...not posted. Would you believe I have already written 24,992 words. I was amazed when he counted it up. And it's only March 9th. I think I posted my first chapter on Mar. 3rd... That's crazy!!!
Smiles, Carol
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I feel like I have barely started reading. On to deliver a six.....
Comment from LJbutterfly
The thing that amazes me is how you have everyone connected in some way. Tommy and the priest are brothers, while Jake, Troy's friend, is hiding in the church recording Tommy's conversation. Layla steps into the mix with no clue her sister was an under-cover cop pretending to be a prostitute, working with a partner who hates prostitutes.
I don't know how such a sweet person can conjure up such evil characters and deeds, but I'm enjoying reading all the fast-paced action.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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The thing that amazes me is how you have everyone connected in some way. Tommy and the priest are brothers, while Jake, Troy's friend, is hiding in the church recording Tommy's conversation. Layla steps into the mix with no clue her sister was an under-cover cop pretending to be a prostitute, working with a partner who hates prostitutes.
I don't know how such a sweet person can conjure up such evil characters and deeds, but I'm enjoying reading all the fast-paced action.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Sometimes I think there's a monster hidden deep inside and it comes out when my fingers touch a keyboard. LOL I really don't know where the ideas come from but when they feel like flowing, it seems to pour out of me. I'm so happy to be writing again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your scenes held together nicely, and we now know for sure who the killer of women is. Tommy really hated his mother. Fortunately, Jake was there to take Layla away before the police arrived. I can't see how you are doing all this writing in the thirty days. Great job. but there are a few things you might want to change: "I don't (know) how . . . and . . . be (here alone). Don't feel the need to send me a note, just write.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Your scenes held together nicely, and we now know for sure who the killer of women is. Tommy really hated his mother. Fortunately, Jake was there to take Layla away before the police arrived. I can't see how you are doing all this writing in the thirty days. Great job. but there are a few things you might want to change: "I don't (know) how . . . and . . . be (here alone). Don't feel the need to send me a note, just write.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I'm writing as we speak...Just proofing chapter 11...which we all know I will miss something. My eyes are getting blurry. And the brain was already on the way out. LOL Thanks so much for reading, Carol. I appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, I don't know where to start, since I've already said about everything I can over the last few chapters. But now you've added a cowboy, killed another girl, and I'm waiting for the Pope to show under cover. LOL thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Wow, I don't know where to start, since I've already said about everything I can over the last few chapters. But now you've added a cowboy, killed another girl, and I'm waiting for the Pope to show under cover. LOL thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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One never can tell...but might have to slip a little light romance in here or there. Can't have the guys smashing up everything and the girls got getting anything out of it. LOL I really have no idea since I've changed the story so much as I go that even I am not sure where I am headed. That cowboy can keep right on moving though. LOL The Pope and I aren't on the best of terms so he declined.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
It seems that perhaps there's more crookedness going on here, it seems there's a lot of contradictory behaviour going on here, and I perceive from your own experience, it's hard to work out the good guys from the bad.mwell done, Carol, usually the good and the bad are established pretty early, here it's the almost good, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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It seems that perhaps there's more crookedness going on here, it seems there's a lot of contradictory behaviour going on here, and I perceive from your own experience, it's hard to work out the good guys from the bad.mwell done, Carol, usually the good and the bad are established pretty early, here it's the almost good, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I think the next chapter will help clear up some of it. Remember these boys all grew up together and then went about living there lives. Now they are tossed together and it's a bit of torn emotions. Thanks so much, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes I noticed that, they are similar in propensity
Comment from lyenochka
Another heart-throbbing episode plus the cast of characters keeps getting larger and more confusing. But I think I'm rooting for Jake and Layla even though he doesn't know she's Layla not Alyssa.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Another heart-throbbing episode plus the cast of characters keeps getting larger and more confusing. But I think I'm rooting for Jake and Layla even though he doesn't know she's Layla not Alyssa.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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I think the next chapter might help clear up somethings.Sammy has a talk with Troy while he is recuperating. He tries to catch Troy up on things that happened while he was in prison and since he got shot. Hopefully, it helps the reader too.
Smiles, Carol