thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "The reviewer"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
2 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and lovely 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. Please check out this one thing:
The one who take the time out.
(took) or
(takes)
Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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This is a very beautiful and lovely 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. Please check out this one thing:
The one who take the time out.
(took) or
(takes)
Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Teri, this is for people like you. Thank you so much for your review and pointing out that I did not put an (s) on take. I thought it. but that don't count. Thanks
Comment from jessizero
I understand appreciating reivewers! I am thankful for everyone who reviews me, as well. You got the syllable count right, and your sentiment was great. I see no need for improvement. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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I understand appreciating reivewers! I am thankful for everyone who reviews me, as well. You got the syllable count right, and your sentiment was great. I see no need for improvement. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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jessizero, this is for you also, I do thank you and appreciate you for your reviews and comments. I like it when people let me know of my mistakes or advise me on how to improve something.