2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "My Lover Rips ".
8 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----if my if I was a lover/ surfer I'd have been caught in a rip tide and dragged miles out to sea and the searchers would find my sun-bloated carcass washed up on some beach a few days later!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----if my if I was a lover/ surfer I'd have been caught in a rip tide and dragged miles out to sea and the searchers would find my sun-bloated carcass washed up on some beach a few days later!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Whether fiction or not, I love to imagine you having this relationship with someone. And since I know that rips means a job well done, all of these terms mean your lover certainly has a happy and successful life. I hope that is what you live too, my dear friend. I hope that some of this is true for you too, as it is another one of your beautiful poems, in words and presentation.
Loved it and wish I had six stars. Thanks so much for sharing.
I am not sure if you saw that I joined your depression and sadness prompt this week. Mine is called Reliving the loneliness of Covid or something like that.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Whether fiction or not, I love to imagine you having this relationship with someone. And since I know that rips means a job well done, all of these terms mean your lover certainly has a happy and successful life. I hope that is what you live too, my dear friend. I hope that some of this is true for you too, as it is another one of your beautiful poems, in words and presentation.
Loved it and wish I had six stars. Thanks so much for sharing.
I am not sure if you saw that I joined your depression and sadness prompt this week. Mine is called Reliving the loneliness of Covid or something like that.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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No lover in my life at the moment lol it would be nice
Thank you very much, Debi,
Love
marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have always wanted to attempt surfing. I'm a strong swimmer, but grew up in Illinois, sort of landlocked, so learning to surf wasn't really an option. LOL Maybe as an old lady, I'll learn. Oh well, dreaming again. I enjoyed your entire presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I have always wanted to attempt surfing. I'm a strong swimmer, but grew up in Illinois, sort of landlocked, so learning to surf wasn't really an option. LOL Maybe as an old lady, I'll learn. Oh well, dreaming again. I enjoyed your entire presentation.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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never too late to learn something new :)
Thank you very much, Barbara.
gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I definitely understood the surfer lingo. My husband used to surf. He hasn't been out in over a year. But he loved it. Said it was out there that he felt closest to God. Loved this one. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I definitely understood the surfer lingo. My husband used to surf. He hasn't been out in over a year. But he loved it. Said it was out there that he felt closest to God. Loved this one. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I have never surfed but I have seen others do it and looks exhilarating. I think it's a sexy sport, you lucky girl. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i love watching surfing!
this was a great poem about the surfer and his waves...
tubular and gnarly imagery with word flow about the crest
cool - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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i love watching surfing!
this was a great poem about the surfer and his waves...
tubular and gnarly imagery with word flow about the crest
cool - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed all your surfing metaphors for life. Yes, there are many unpredictable things in life like the waves and the ups and downs that don't always go as planned. But we can cheer each other on to "always come down on top!"
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Enjoyed all your surfing metaphors for life. Yes, there are many unpredictable things in life like the waves and the ups and downs that don't always go as planned. But we can cheer each other on to "always come down on top!"
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I had to fix this poem. It was pretty bad. It looked fine this morning lol
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Alas, I cannot swim. You have true feelings for your writing that stand out right away. These days, my reviewing is slow. I am
hibernating. My pain is such that I am taking my aspirin whenever I wake up after fours or more of sleep. I am keeping track of my dosage times. Then, I drink some liquid, eat a pouch of tuna, and crawl under my heated blankets and pads. Off to sleep I go, Karen :-)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Alas, I cannot swim. You have true feelings for your writing that stand out right away. These days, my reviewing is slow. I am
hibernating. My pain is such that I am taking my aspirin whenever I wake up after fours or more of sleep. I am keeping track of my dosage times. Then, I drink some liquid, eat a pouch of tuna, and crawl under my heated blankets and pads. Off to sleep I go, Karen :-)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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:-)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Another enjoyable poem. For me it captures what love is in a unique way. Not a surfer - but can relate to the poem. Love the imagery of riding the highs and lows. Yes that is how it goes. Very creative. Makes you think!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Another enjoyable poem. For me it captures what love is in a unique way. Not a surfer - but can relate to the poem. Love the imagery of riding the highs and lows. Yes that is how it goes. Very creative. Makes you think!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs