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Malice

Beware of the consequences

8 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This post is proof that it only takes a few words to make a huge point. Congratulations on your blue ribbon winner. I'm just sorry that I didn't get to read it when it was posted. Outstanding. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-May-2024

reply by the author on 10-May-2024
    ❤️x
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Malice is the intention to do evil. This description reminds me of the devil (Satan). I will never give Him any a bit of my time because he is the most evil person on this earth. I'm not sure what happened to this lady, but was she full of revenge?

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
    Yes. Thanks for the review Rosemary.
Comment from jaded831
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Your poem strikes the soul. Often holding on to ill feelings, hurts you more than the person that wronged you. Letting it go benefits everyone. It is like a weight lifted from life.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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This is an excellent example of a Senryu poem. The writing is clean and tight within its 5-7-5 format. I especially like the artwork chosen to go with it and the colors used as background and font. Very classical looking.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much Marilyn.
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. The message is very good. Your picture reflects this poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was fantastic. It rings so true which I think is part of the reason I liked the poem so much. Loved the last line as letting it go can be an act of bravery. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
    Thanks so much for the great review
Comment from Jeano
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Read them all, and yours stood out to me as having common sense and useful information. We've all known people who just won't let "it' go. Nothing but trouble follows. Good luck with the contest. You've got my vote.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I liked reading this poem. The words in the poem are so good. The picture is very colorful and good for tge words. Malice does nothing except make matters worse. Very good job

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
    Many thanks