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The instant you know desire16 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This is a poem of longing, lust and love. It is erotic by not overdone.
It tells of what we all wish for, our perfect match.
Hope this does well in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
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Hi Melissa,
This is a poem of longing, lust and love. It is erotic by not overdone.
It tells of what we all wish for, our perfect match.
Hope this does well in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sensual and intimate poem filled with passion and excitement in the anticipation of a touching kiss and connection, I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x
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This is a sensual and intimate poem filled with passion and excitement in the anticipation of a touching kiss and connection, I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
Comment from jmdg1954
Not only is this post one of love and emotion, but is also very erotic in a clean sense which is better for the palette then smut that is written (not so much here on FS).
The back round color and white font lends itself perfectly to the seductive tone of you poem.
I have to go outdoors now just to cool down.
Very well written, thank you.
John
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Not only is this post one of love and emotion, but is also very erotic in a clean sense which is better for the palette then smut that is written (not so much here on FS).
The back round color and white font lends itself perfectly to the seductive tone of you poem.
I have to go outdoors now just to cool down.
Very well written, thank you.
John
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I think this poem is very powerful. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is perfect for your words, it captures the words so well. I love the words. Great jo. Well written.
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I think this poem is very powerful. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is perfect for your words, it captures the words so well. I love the words. Great jo. Well written.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
There is much to like about this story. I found the white on black letter, as well as the font very captivating, and that isn't even considering the steam rising from the letters typed. Well done.
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There is much to like about this story. I found the white on black letter, as well as the font very captivating, and that isn't even considering the steam rising from the letters typed. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
Comment from Lisasview
Nice sensuous write JustAFan.....I too write sensuous poems...
The only thing I was not crazy about was that you decided to put all of your writing to the left... Not as easy and flowing as it could be centered in the middle... Do you know how to do that? If not I can walk you through it...
Of course this is my thought but again I do think it would flow better...especially as you entered it into a contest.
Lisasview, now in Spain
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Nice sensuous write JustAFan.....I too write sensuous poems...
The only thing I was not crazy about was that you decided to put all of your writing to the left... Not as easy and flowing as it could be centered in the middle... Do you know how to do that? If not I can walk you through it...
Of course this is my thought but again I do think it would flow better...especially as you entered it into a contest.
Lisasview, now in Spain
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
I read your profile and sorry, I'm not the best by far, but feel free to go into my portfolio anytime. I find it interesting you wanted to be a reporter and tomorrow, I'm posting chapter three of my novel featuring a female reporter. As for your poem, there were no faults I can see. Your words are enticing and the fellow you wrote this for is very fortunate, indeed.
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I read your profile and sorry, I'm not the best by far, but feel free to go into my portfolio anytime. I find it interesting you wanted to be a reporter and tomorrow, I'm posting chapter three of my novel featuring a female reporter. As for your poem, there were no faults I can see. Your words are enticing and the fellow you wrote this for is very fortunate, indeed.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written form, and I enjoyed listening to it. I do not like it when people rectify everything to the right side. It makes it harder to read if you're just reading it yourself. This is just my idea of how it looks and sounds. Patricia.
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This is a very well written form, and I enjoyed listening to it. I do not like it when people rectify everything to the right side. It makes it harder to read if you're just reading it yourself. This is just my idea of how it looks and sounds. Patricia.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Jesse James Doty
It's interesting and provocative how you keep referring to your mind when your heart is in it too. You write my mind adrift with longing and then you write my mind explodes as if your mind has anything to do with your bodily sensations. I suggest this sensual poem wishes for the body, mind, heart, and soul explosion to crease the body of you forevermore.
Jesse
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It's interesting and provocative how you keep referring to your mind when your heart is in it too. You write my mind adrift with longing and then you write my mind explodes as if your mind has anything to do with your bodily sensations. I suggest this sensual poem wishes for the body, mind, heart, and soul explosion to crease the body of you forevermore.
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Missy, you have done it again. You've written such a sensual free form poem for the contest. It's so true to your style. I love it. It's also good to see you back. Ulla xcx
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Aw, Missy, you have done it again. You've written such a sensual free form poem for the contest. It's so true to your style. I love it. It's also good to see you back. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
