Game of a Lifetime.
The joy of high school sports.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures the excitement and thrill of a memorable baseball game. I can't remember being a champion but the joy of winning is certainly caught here and brings back memories. Keep up the excellent work!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the excitement and thrill of a memorable baseball game. I can't remember being a champion but the joy of winning is certainly caught here and brings back memories. Keep up the excellent work!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from Julie Helms
What an excellent job you did with building tension and then excitement through this ABC poem!
Knots filled out stomachs (should that be 'our' stomachs?)
Best of luck in the contest! Julie
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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What an excellent job you did with building tension and then excitement through this ABC poem!
Knots filled out stomachs (should that be 'our' stomachs?)
Best of luck in the contest! Julie
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thanks of the catch. I will edit.