Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

As I read, this piece became calming and serene. There's no better way to explain this as I read. Your writing has a smoothness and a grace that I can only categorize here as some of the best on this site. Beautiful, spiritual, and so so, Gordon!

Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thank you ever so much, your review was kind and i am flattered dear friend.

Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson

Exceptional

Whoa! This is so powerful! I don't even know where to start! The words and the images that I get from reading this are beyond words. It is so rich in its content. Thanks for sharing this!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

I feel flattered and blest to know you enjoyed this piece of work. Thank you friend.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

this has wonderful imagery of a nice relaxing and peaceful walk
however, this is formatted as prose - suggestion: maybe break up the lines into stanzas?

Let me hold your hand,
as we walk through the sensual
stirring of the spirit into a newly formed being,
kindred to him whose very eyes are the stars
and whose emblem is legendary above all else.

just a few thoughts... thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thanks for the advice and the great review. Have a blest day.