The Little Things
It's the little things that mean the most.18 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, yes, the little things. The ones we take for granted. Those little smiles. Sand between our toes. And the simple little kisses on our foreheads or tips of your nose. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Oh, yes, the little things. The ones we take for granted. Those little smiles. Sand between our toes. And the simple little kisses on our foreheads or tips of your nose. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Awe, I love those sentiments and that rhyme. Should have put that in my poem ;-)
Glenda
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. Yes the little things are really the bigger things and very important in life. Beautiful overall presentation. Nicely written poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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This is a nicely written poem. Yes the little things are really the bigger things and very important in life. Beautiful overall presentation. Nicely written poem. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Glenda
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is priceless. Goes well with your words. The picture reminds me of my grandkids when they were little. I like your rhyming pattern. Great job.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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What a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is priceless. Goes well with your words. The picture reminds me of my grandkids when they were little. I like your rhyming pattern. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much.
Blessings,
Glenda
Comment from bob cullen
Glenda this flows so smoothly and with great innocence. I guess the involvement of kids bring that. Your flow and rhyme bring a sweetness to this poem. A truly uplifting write only a mother could pen.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Glenda this flows so smoothly and with great innocence. I guess the involvement of kids bring that. Your flow and rhyme bring a sweetness to this poem. A truly uplifting write only a mother could pen.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Awe, thank you for such a sweet review. I enjoyed writing this, it was a very easy write--sometimes you just wake up and the words are there. Maybe more a God thing than a mom thing :-).
Bless you for making my evening.
Glenda
Comment from Neil Samways
I enjoyed this poem, but struggled to read it due to the font and had to slow down to make sure I got some of the words otherwise a very nice poem. Always appreciate the little things life brings, I my self love star lit evenings
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed this poem, but struggled to read it due to the font and had to slow down to make sure I got some of the words otherwise a very nice poem. Always appreciate the little things life brings, I my self love star lit evenings
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. I'm sorry the don't was burdensome to you. It reminded me of my grandmother's handwriting, and I thought of her when writing this poem.
Blessings,
Glenda
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed your poem very much. I could identify with every single item that you presented, but most of all, "Time spent with my siblings"- who are no longer here, and "my children at play" - who now watch their own grandchildren at play! ; )
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed your poem very much. I could identify with every single item that you presented, but most of all, "Time spent with my siblings"- who are no longer here, and "my children at play" - who now watch their own grandchildren at play! ; )
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Oh, thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I thought quite a bit about my childhood playtime with my brother, my 3 daughter's and now my granddaughter. A lot of joy and innocence to celebrate in those memories.
Blessings,
Glenda
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a delightful poem and so very true. As I get older I greatly appreciate the little things that include the people I love. Belongings take on less meaning as my age increases. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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What a delightful poem and so very true. As I get older I greatly appreciate the little things that include the people I love. Belongings take on less meaning as my age increases. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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One of the perks of aging :-)
Thank you so much Marilyn for your kind review. Blessings to you!
Glenda
Comment from Lisasview
Hello again Glenda,
Went into your portfolio to see if there was anything else new I could read ( sometime portfolios are the best way to find works of other writers) and I came across this one of yours.
Loved it!! The image, font and pink background were all perfect for your poem!
Lisaview
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Hello again Glenda,
Went into your portfolio to see if there was anything else new I could read ( sometime portfolios are the best way to find works of other writers) and I came across this one of yours.
Loved it!! The image, font and pink background were all perfect for your poem!
Lisaview
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Oh, I appreciate you taking the time to do that. Thank you so much for the kind review and I am so glad you liked this one.
Blessings-
Glenda
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You are quite welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Deborah Dybowski
I agree with you about the little things. I believe it's the little things that mean the most. As we grow older, it's the little things we remember most. Especially our children when they were young. We never thought they would grow up at the time, and then as if no time has passed, they've grown and made lives of their own.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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I agree with you about the little things. I believe it's the little things that mean the most. As we grow older, it's the little things we remember most. Especially our children when they were young. We never thought they would grow up at the time, and then as if no time has passed, they've grown and made lives of their own.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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So true. It happens fast. Thank you so much for the review.
Blessings.
Glenda
Comment from teafor2
Glenda, this is one of the most heart-warming List Poems I had the honor
of reviewing on fanstory or anywhere else. These three look Hollywood
bound in their too kool sunshades:) I am a Girls Dad, but envious of you,
because I only have two darlings:) This reads like it's written from the heart and in cursive...How old school and a Lost Art, and so charming.
Where's that contest for something like this:) teafor2
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Glenda, this is one of the most heart-warming List Poems I had the honor
of reviewing on fanstory or anywhere else. These three look Hollywood
bound in their too kool sunshades:) I am a Girls Dad, but envious of you,
because I only have two darlings:) This reads like it's written from the heart and in cursive...How old school and a Lost Art, and so charming.
Where's that contest for something like this:) teafor2
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Oh my goodness, this is the loveliest review I have received. I am so appreciative of this. Getting to be a mother of three girls has truly been my biggest blessing. Now I have one granddaughter-oh what joy this is. Imagine if I ever have a little boy to spoil ;-). This was what I woke with on my heart this morning. Thank you so much for the kind review. Enjoy your darlings and God bless.
Glenda
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You are welcome. Always keep a pen and pad some where close by...These thought(s) are precious, but fleeting. teafor2
