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War mothers

Unfathomable the heartbreak and pain of war tragedy

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have three votes.

The death toll in Gaza continues to rise 30.000 .

10,000 were children, blown to piece or crush under the rubble.

The UN voted again for a ceasefire and America vetoed it again.

Mothers weep for their dead children and children weep for their dead parents.

Israel is starving the Palestinians in the Strip.

The world is watching .

America has so much to say about Russia and China being ruthless , but it is complicit in the war crimes Netanyahu is committing on the population in Gaza.

Mankind has lost its humanity.



 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Hello tempeste! Thank you much for your vote which helped me eek out a third place finish.
    Yes, I agree mankind seems to be losing its humanity.
    Indeed the U.S. is complicit to the atrocities in Gaza. It's sickening.
reply by tempeste on 03-Mar-2024
    Yeah! 🍾🥂

    It?s a win for me too! 😝
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Yay! A win for you too
    Eccellente!!
reply by tempeste on 03-Mar-2024
    No I didn?t win anything but when I vote for someone that wins , I feel it s a win for me too. It makes me happy I contribute😝
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Ahhhh yes I see ?you are indeed complicit in many of my ribbons :)
Comment from papa55mike
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People are a paradox. We can destroy lives one moment and then create something beautiful the next. Too many women have been grieved by losses due to war. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thanks Mike
Comment from derek campbell
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Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
    Thanks for the encouragement