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i hope one day to make all the animals on Noah's Ark !

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Comment from Helvi2
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Not only did you write a great 5-7-5 poem but I'm equally impressed that you do origami. You said one day you'd like to create all the animals on Noah's ark so I'm assuming you did the ones in the image you presented. Your poem fits Origami perfectly. Very Nicely Done! Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi2

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    I wish? but I do hope to reach that amazing level in the future.

    Those I took from Pinterest .

    I practise in autumn and winter. In Spring and Summer I m more out and about and enjoy walks in my pine forest and chestnut woods.

    Thank you for the kind feedback ,

    Take care!🍀

Comment from Rachelle Allen
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What a TERRIFIC goal!!!! Origami is so extremely special. It always makes me wonder about the people who invented it. Were they more bored than creative or more creative than bored? I've seen some AMAZING finished products!!

Good luck in the contest. (You should make an origami trophy for yourself if you win!) xo

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024

Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count in each line is on point, meeting the requirements for this contest. Your picture accentuates the poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank for the kind words . Glad you enjoyed the read .

    I haven?t reached the exceptional level one needs to make those in the artwork above but with constant practise I hope to one day.
Comment from Elise H
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I liked the idea of joining winter with fingers. My hands are always terribly cold and clumsy when the weather turns, so it was an interesting juxtaposition.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Enjoying origami actually helps one s health.

    It requires hand-eye coordination which helps develop fine-motor skills and supports mental concentration.

    You should try it there are several beginners tutorials on line.

    I started with a book I bought some 15 odd years ago
    ( I didn?t have a computer of mobile phone yet)