Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. The message in your poem is good and paint a good mental picture. Your 2-4-2 syllable count is on point for this contest. Outstanding complimentary picture. Nice job.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I'm reading the book, When Worlds Collide, which gives this poem a different slant to me. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I like reading your poem. The picture fits the powm very well. Love the picture. It is so pretty. I like the way you worded the poem. Great job on this.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I'd never heard of galaxies colliding, but it was a lovely thought. I like your use of the picture to add to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

Comment from Barry Penfold

Good

Great image and I can clearly depict the collision of the souls and Galaxies.
I hope you go well in the contest. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024

Thanks