Prickly's Perfect Playmate
Finding you're not the odd one out is always a relief.16 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is contest entry is very cute and adorable. I got a huge smile from reading. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
This is contest entry is very cute and adorable. I got a huge smile from reading. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. I got an honorable mention so I can't complain. xxx
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your poem. cactuses are usually not cute, but this i one is. It is funny. This poem has good imagination. Very good job on this poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
I enjoyed your poem. cactuses are usually not cute, but this i one is. It is funny. This poem has good imagination. Very good job on this poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I do love cactuses (cacti), I don't really know why and I have a friend who's got quite a 'prickly' personality and whose balcony is full of ginormous ones. I wonder...
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The picture is adorable... I like the presentation.
Goodluck!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The picture is adorable... I like the presentation.
Goodluck!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Gypsy. The presentation will never be as good as yours, but still... xxx
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Prickly's Perfect Playmate, takes the cactus from the driest portion of the earth and matches him up with a creature from the ocean. Neat.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
This 2-4-2, Prickly's Perfect Playmate, takes the cactus from the driest portion of the earth and matches him up with a creature from the ocean. Neat.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much, Bill. I hope you and your wife are doing well. xxx
Comment from mermaids
I love this little poem. It is too cute and how wonderful, the cactus and sea urchin are friends. Your picture is cute too and I have a fondness for cactus so I was delighted to come across your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
I love this little poem. It is too cute and how wonderful, the cactus and sea urchin are friends. Your picture is cute too and I have a fondness for cactus so I was delighted to come across your poem.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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So do I. I like all plants, but it's always more difficult to kill a cactus even if you aren't a great gardener. xxx
Comment from Mintybee
This is really cute. The way you used ellipses added to the punchline effect. The picture is adorable. The author's note had me intrigued, and I'm glad I read the poem.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
This is really cute. The way you used ellipses added to the punchline effect. The picture is adorable. The author's note had me intrigued, and I'm glad I read the poem.
Mintybee
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks. You're sweet.
Comment from Ric Myworld
The three "P"s of your story's prickly little point. LOL. Having never seen a hedgehog, sometimes called a prickly-pig, or a porcupine in person, I'll just have to keep my distance and trust what I'm told. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
The three "P"s of your story's prickly little point. LOL. Having never seen a hedgehog, sometimes called a prickly-pig, or a porcupine in person, I'll just have to keep my distance and trust what I'm told. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I've never seen one in person either, but they look cute in pictures.:)
Comment from Sally Law
This is out-of-the-box fun in short verse poetry, my friend. It made me chuckle and smile. A ribbon winner for sure!
Sending you my best today, as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sal Xos
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
This is out-of-the-box fun in short verse poetry, my friend. It made me chuckle and smile. A ribbon winner for sure!
Sending you my best today, as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest, Sal Xos
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Sally. Take care.
Comment from patcelaw
Sometimes it is just fun to make a poem. That's just a silly little thing and I enjoyed this very much. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia .
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
Sometimes it is just fun to make a poem. That's just a silly little thing and I enjoyed this very much. I wish you the very best in the contest. Patricia .
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Patricia.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Here's where our tastes diverge - I hate prickly things:-)
This is a fun read and fine presentation for this contest, and I wish you luck. These short forms are tough to write.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
Here's where our tastes diverge - I hate prickly things:-)
This is a fun read and fine presentation for this contest, and I wish you luck. These short forms are tough to write.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Tough indeed. Thanks for reading. xxx