Etheridge
A widower's love for his wife7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're very brave attempting a contest as your first milestone post. Congratulations!!! I enjoyed reading. Yes, Etheridge will be reunited with is his wife, Charlotte. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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You're very brave attempting a contest as your first milestone post. Congratulations!!! I enjoyed reading. Yes, Etheridge will be reunited with is his wife, Charlotte. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Hi, Barbara :-) I don't know about brave...maybe "just didn't understand the process?" Nothing ventured... Cheers - Aisha
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your story contained a great amount of detail in very few words, which is impressive. I liked the end, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your story contained a great amount of detail in very few words, which is impressive. I liked the end, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much! After "knowing" Etheridge for so many years, I've become quite fond of the old geezer, so I enjoyed sending him out for others to enjoy. (smile)
Aisha
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing your fine descriptive writing. You put this reader right in the picture of everything going on. Short flash fiction is hard to write and you do it well. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thanks for sharing your fine descriptive writing. You put this reader right in the picture of everything going on. Short flash fiction is hard to write and you do it well. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Hi, Ric! What a great compliment!!! I live in a desert where intelligent, interested feedback on my writing is concerned, so your reviews are very encouraging!
Comment from royowen
Most writing is, or should be plucked from nowhere, knowing that, I can keep the faiyh, although I will say, I'm posting a lot of old unreleased poems from the past, and they are still fresh, beautifully written, you deserve a chance, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Most writing is, or should be plucked from nowhere, knowing that, I can keep the faiyh, although I will say, I'm posting a lot of old unreleased poems from the past, and they are still fresh, beautifully written, you deserve a chance, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Roy! All blessings graciously accepted! (smile)
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Good job
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Etheridge, is a quick capture of what seems like a lone survivor of what was a long and happy marriage. His glance at an old picture of the pair makes the story clear. Nice.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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This story, Etheridge, is a quick capture of what seems like a lone survivor of what was a long and happy marriage. His glance at an old picture of the pair makes the story clear. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thanks much, Bill! Yes, Etheridge surely does miss his missus!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I didn't really understand this piece. I read it over and over. I do, however, feel like there is a memory somehow involved. It felt like a rough water rafting ride as there was something I was clearly missing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I didn't really understand this piece. I read it over and over. I do, however, feel like there is a memory somehow involved. It felt like a rough water rafting ride as there was something I was clearly missing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Hi, Mia - There's certainly a lot left on the cutting room floor when going from 243 words to 100 words, so some confusion isn't surprising. Thank you for reading and posting a review! Cheers - Aisha
Comment from Begin Again
When one half of a couple who have been together for a very long time is left to face each day alone, it is sad and empty. Finding the picture of his wife made him happy and he remembered the good days.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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When one half of a couple who have been together for a very long time is left to face each day alone, it is sad and empty. Finding the picture of his wife made him happy and he remembered the good days.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Carol!
