Under the Wolf's Moon
A wolf hunting in order to feed her young pups3 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Oh my gosh, who is "you"??? I'm looking over my shoulder now! Very powerful poem, good descriptions, excellent tension. It was also very creative to set this underneath the moon, and the great descriptions you gave it.
Nicely done! Julie
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Oh my gosh, who is "you"??? I'm looking over my shoulder now! Very powerful poem, good descriptions, excellent tension. It was also very creative to set this underneath the moon, and the great descriptions you gave it.
Nicely done! Julie
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for all the positive feedback. Initially, I started writing for fun, but after receiving so much positive feedback, I am starting to think that I might be a better writer than what I had previously assumed. Alternatively, everyone on here could just be really nice.
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It's a combination of both. You are an excellent writer. And there are also many reviewers on here who will only say nice things! Keep up the great work!
Comment from Elise H
Hi Austin. I enjoyed how sinister your narrator was in this poem and how easy it was to follow the story. I also really liked your describing of the moon with a "dim honey glow." I thought that that contrasted with the dark subject matter well and shows us what the narrator, though dangerous, has their own likes.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Hi Austin. I enjoyed how sinister your narrator was in this poem and how easy it was to follow the story. I also really liked your describing of the moon with a "dim honey glow." I thought that that contrasted with the dark subject matter well and shows us what the narrator, though dangerous, has their own likes.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much
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Thank you so much
Comment from royowen
I think you did a fine job with this Austin, it could seem a little ambiguous, buy I think it's. pretty good really, of course it's a momma vampire, or a werewolf, or a Just a good momma wolf, with her small pack, well rhymed, articulate, smooth and well written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I think you did a fine job with this Austin, it could seem a little ambiguous, buy I think it's. pretty good really, of course it's a momma vampire, or a werewolf, or a Just a good momma wolf, with her small pack, well rhymed, articulate, smooth and well written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much
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Thanks so much
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Bless you
