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I Don't Have Friends

I cry out of loneliness

2 total reviews 
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed this poem. There are children in school like this. There is bullying and kids leave others put. Very good poem and picture picture matched the words. Very good job

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This poem shares the feeling of a very sad person who doesn't know how to relate to other people. Loneliness is a horrible experience that brings about depression. In real life, there are things to do to break the cycle of aloneness...join a club or group. If you can't leave your house, invite someone over to share something. Great poem that adequately describes loneliness. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much!