thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "The promise"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
2 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a nice nonet poem. Your syllable count is on point in each line for this contest. I did see a small thing needing correction, in line 4 you wrote "ask God to give yiu sight". Otherwise, nice poem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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This is a nice nonet poem. Your syllable count is on point in each line for this contest. I did see a small thing needing correction, in line 4 you wrote "ask God to give yiu sight". Otherwise, nice poem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and pointing out my mistake,I really do appreciate it. Have a good day.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This nonet tells an interesting story, but an important feature of the best nonets is a harmonious shape. It would be good if you could change some of the words with that in mind. kay
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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This nonet tells an interesting story, but an important feature of the best nonets is a harmonious shape. It would be good if you could change some of the words with that in mind. kay
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review I I appreciate it. I will keep that in mind. Have a good day.