Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Seashells by the seashore. Penney Penelope Applebee is a mouthful for sure, just a little bit of tongue twister. It is great to see that she was doing a fundraiser at the flea market.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024

Thanks so much. :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I love this Children's rhyming poem you have penned for the contest. I love seashells and things collected from the sea. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thanks so much, l'm so glad you liked my poem. :)

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Exceptional

This was by far my favorite of all the poems in this contest. The message was wonderful, the rhyme scheme as close to perfect as can be. I loved the color of the letters that went well with the theme, and the artwork was perfectly matched and gorgeous. Got my vote. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thank you for those wonderful six stars and for your vote...it means a lot to me. :)

Comment from Baltimore Born

Exceptional

This is a well-crafted poem. The poem had a musical flow to it. Great rhyming scheme from beginning to end. Each stanza connected well with each other. The last two lines closes the poem well. Outstanding job.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thank you for this exceptional review, it means so much. :)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I love the name: Penny Penelope Applebee. The poem didn't let me down. It was a fun read. Excellent use of rhyme. This flowed easily and the word choices were perfect. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. The rhyming was great. Very descriptive. This is a good poem for children. I liked the picture. Also. The name you used was very creative. Great job

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thank you, that's very kind of you. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I haven't heard from this little girl in a while and I enjoyed her latest antics here for the children's poetry contest. An uplifting post and a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024

Thanks for remembering her. :)

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This would be a nice poem for older children, possibly even those in Sunday School programs, as it would be so familiar to them. I could image the 5th graders I used to have in my Sunday School class, enjoying this. There are many good rhymes here but best of all is the wonderful imagery and the descriptions because Penny and her parents for instance. I think this is relatable to many kids. Thank you for sharing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024

Thank you for this positive review. :)