Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Haha! Fun and full of very acceptable humour, no horror as the prompt advises! Your story reads well with good structure, perfect length and ending. Some small edits: Despite the chaos she felt a sudden (sense?) of serendipity; both took a sip (a)gain. My selection. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024

As always, thanks so much for the close read, the catches and the comments. Appreciated.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

You did a really good job making a cursed object humorous and not horror inducing. Imagining the scene, the cat, the fish, the bird, all very well described, and quite funny!

Her cat climb onto the table (climbed)

Thanks for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024

Thanks for the catch and for the encouraging feedback.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me smile with this enchanting write about the effects of wine and I want to know where I can buy a bottle? Ha ha ha, I loved the humour here, an entertaining post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024

Thank you, me too, I like a bottle. Thanks for the read and feedback.xx