Unwind
reaction to stress15 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
So simple and such good advice. All we have to do is look around and then see how fortunate we are. As my mother once said. 'Don't compare to others, just look and do your best. Be you. No one does that as well as you.'
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So simple and such good advice. All we have to do is look around and then see how fortunate we are. As my mother once said. 'Don't compare to others, just look and do your best. Be you. No one does that as well as you.'
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
Comment from DREAMCHILD78
Yes. This poem expresses an essential reality we all face during the life experience. Mind and body are bound within the limits of the modern world, requiring consistent pursuit of happiness without consideration for the necessity of actual experience of existing. In a few words that rhyme we are delivered the ultimate request of humanity. Thank you.
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Yes. This poem expresses an essential reality we all face during the life experience. Mind and body are bound within the limits of the modern world, requiring consistent pursuit of happiness without consideration for the necessity of actual experience of existing. In a few words that rhyme we are delivered the ultimate request of humanity. Thank you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
nice little relaxing poem...
a calmly smooth flowing rhyme
one suggestion i do have is to maybe try the black background and a light blue font? just a thought! ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
my body - tense - I unwind -
would you be so kind,
says my mind,
let go and let God
for He is kind -
relax your muscles
and you will find
a measure of your mind -
for it is to your benefit to unwind...
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nice little relaxing poem...
a calmly smooth flowing rhyme
one suggestion i do have is to maybe try the black background and a light blue font? just a thought! ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
my body - tense - I unwind -
would you be so kind,
says my mind,
let go and let God
for He is kind -
relax your muscles
and you will find
a measure of your mind -
for it is to your benefit to unwind...
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is good, I like it rhymes which is good. The picture fit it extremely well. Together they make for a terribly pleasant experience. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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That is good, I like it rhymes which is good. The picture fit it extremely well. Together they make for a terribly pleasant experience. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Esther Brown
As a fellow medical provider, I understand. It is exhausting to spend your energy for others day after day. At the end of the day, unwinding by writing is a gift. Let go let God is a mantra for me. "Help you help you" people are often so focused on helping everyone else they have no where to go for solace themselves.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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As a fellow medical provider, I understand. It is exhausting to spend your energy for others day after day. At the end of the day, unwinding by writing is a gift. Let go let God is a mantra for me. "Help you help you" people are often so focused on helping everyone else they have no where to go for solace themselves.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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So true. We often do not take care of ourselves. Thank you for reading and understanding. Elaine
Comment from lyenochka
What a soothing poem to help us relax. You not only cover tension in the muscles but also worries on the mind and the need to care for the spirit by turning all things to the Lord Who is in control over everything. Thanks for this reminder!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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What a soothing poem to help us relax. You not only cover tension in the muscles but also worries on the mind and the need to care for the spirit by turning all things to the Lord Who is in control over everything. Thanks for this reminder!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very clever poem format and done very well. We could all do with a bit of de-stressing these days. The artwork was quite calming and therefore perfect for the poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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A very clever poem format and done very well. We could all do with a bit of de-stressing these days. The artwork was quite calming and therefore perfect for the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Stress causes us to suffer so many other illnesses in life and relaxing and distressing has a big benefit in life, I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Stress causes us to suffer so many other illnesses in life and relaxing and distressing has a big benefit in life, I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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I appreciate your taking time to read my "Unwind" poem. It is nice to get away from stress. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Sanku
I think you are right.I have often felt like this .The body is telling the mind 'for God's sake let go'.Very well expressed we all have to de stress regularly
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I think you are right.I have often felt like this .The body is telling the mind 'for God's sake let go'.Very well expressed we all have to de stress regularly
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from jessizero
I liked your rhymes and the way you repeated certain words. This poem reads as very simple, and I mean that in a good way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I liked your rhymes and the way you repeated certain words. This poem reads as very simple, and I mean that in a good way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
