Mermouse
fantasy, some rhyme17 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
I need to know what your mermouse looks like. For a second or two I pictured a cat sized whiskered tailed mermaid pet...with oversized ears?
A likeable rather cuddly water companion? I guess I need to check out the Martha rendition.
Liked it, Esther
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
I need to know what your mermouse looks like. For a second or two I pictured a cat sized whiskered tailed mermaid pet...with oversized ears?
A likeable rather cuddly water companion? I guess I need to check out the Martha rendition.
Liked it, Esther
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Hopefully I will be able to upload a pic at some point. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from royowen
I have a difficult computer but not for images heh heh, yes one has to have a knack for public mics, some folk are brilliant, I've done very little, well done dear friend, sorry about the artwork, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
I have a difficult computer but not for images heh heh, yes one has to have a knack for public mics, some folk are brilliant, I've done very little, well done dear friend, sorry about the artwork, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful words. Elaine
Comment from teafor2
Mermaids, just from your title, notes, tone and theme's imagery...This is
captivating verbiage (without the picture/art) of an ekphrastic poem... An
enchanting fantasized romantic encounter/relationship. I imagine what a
picture would bring to this post! Get that blasted computer to do your biding. teafor2
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
Mermaids, just from your title, notes, tone and theme's imagery...This is
captivating verbiage (without the picture/art) of an ekphrastic poem... An
enchanting fantasized romantic encounter/relationship. I imagine what a
picture would bring to this post! Get that blasted computer to do your biding. teafor2
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Love your words. Thanks so much. Elaine
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from Douglas Goff
That is a first for me. I have never heard of a met mouse before. But isn't that the beauty of imagination? It really can take us anywhere we can think of.
Great piece. This was enjoyable!
D
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
That is a first for me. I have never heard of a met mouse before. But isn't that the beauty of imagination? It really can take us anywhere we can think of.
Great piece. This was enjoyable!
D
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Now I want a mermouse! Such a cute poem and very descriptive prose. This would make an excellent idea for a children's book. Thanks for sharing your work. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
Now I want a mermouse! Such a cute poem and very descriptive prose. This would make an excellent idea for a children's book. Thanks for sharing your work. Nicely written.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from jim vecchio
I wish I could see that painting, but you did an excellent job of painting her with your words. I attended an art class yet, but all I painted was a lifeless vase with flowers. I see you are doubly talented, s painter with paint, and also with words!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
I wish I could see that painting, but you did an excellent job of painting her with your words. I attended an art class yet, but all I painted was a lifeless vase with flowers. I see you are doubly talented, s painter with paint, and also with words!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I am honored! Thank you. Elaine
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It's an honor to read your words!
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It's an honor to read your words!
Comment from Julie G1
Great verse. This poem presents a unique and enchanting response to the prompt. The word pictures depict a whimsical message. The poet's choice of language is effective. Well done. This reader hopes to enjoy more such verse.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
Great verse. This poem presents a unique and enchanting response to the prompt. The word pictures depict a whimsical message. The poet's choice of language is effective. Well done. This reader hopes to enjoy more such verse.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I'm not sure what a mermouse is though. Poem has good rhyming. The art class sounds interesting. Very good job on this
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
I enjoyed reading your poem. I'm not sure what a mermouse is though. Poem has good rhyming. The art class sounds interesting. Very good job on this
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved reading your poem. You show us the creation process of an artist in such a unique way. Very creative. Wonderful word choices. And an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
I loved reading your poem. You show us the creation process of an artist in such a unique way. Very creative. Wonderful word choices. And an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my Mermouse poem. Elaine
Comment from Sally Law
Your fantastical mind plunges into deeper waters with the meremouse. The little sea creature brings you comfort and calm in the briny seas. Of note:
but her waters
are mellow, soothing
a soft blanket of saltiness
she invites me to jump
into her ocean world
Magnificent, my talented friend of the sea.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
Your fantastical mind plunges into deeper waters with the meremouse. The little sea creature brings you comfort and calm in the briny seas. Of note:
but her waters
are mellow, soothing
a soft blanket of saltiness
she invites me to jump
into her ocean world
Magnificent, my talented friend of the sea.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal Xos
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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My best to you as well. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine