Bluegrass Morning
I decided to write about ducks.10 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Welcome to the site Austin.
This is a great start. Congrats on getting an honorable mention in the contest with your first poem
This is a funny picture that opposes the calmness of the poem. It seems like this is a beach that has flooded out. It is witty to think that ducks need a lifeguard to keep them safe while they swim.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
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Welcome to the site Austin.
This is a great start. Congrats on getting an honorable mention in the contest with your first poem
This is a funny picture that opposes the calmness of the poem. It seems like this is a beach that has flooded out. It is witty to think that ducks need a lifeguard to keep them safe while they swim.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your milestone and honourable mention! This is a very evocative 5-7-5, requiring no image, such is the calm and tranquility of this bluegrass morning. Thanks for sharing Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Congrats on your milestone and honourable mention! This is a very evocative 5-7-5, requiring no image, such is the calm and tranquility of this bluegrass morning. Thanks for sharing Debbie
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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thanks so much
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You are very brave trying a contest as your first post. Congratulations on your first milestone post. I enjoyed reading this entry and want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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You are very brave trying a contest as your first post. Congratulations on your first milestone post. I enjoyed reading this entry and want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your positive review.
Comment from Lisasview
First read of your Austin and I must say I really enjoyed it. Simple words with a clear meaning.
Very nice. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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First read of your Austin and I must say I really enjoyed it. Simple words with a clear meaning.
Very nice. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Lisasview
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much
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Welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The twilight turned th grass blue here before the sun appears to lighten the load, a fine poem for the 5-7-5 contest and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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The twilight turned th grass blue here before the sun appears to lighten the load, a fine poem for the 5-7-5 contest and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the kind comments
Comment from mermaids
"Ducks glide on water's mirror" is a marvelous line. I like the image your create with your words. Your 5-7-5 form takes the reader out into nature and creates a feel for being there. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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"Ducks glide on water's mirror" is a marvelous line. I like the image your create with your words. Your 5-7-5 form takes the reader out into nature and creates a feel for being there. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much, l have always enjoyed poetry and wordplay.
Comment from Julie Helms
Welcome to fan story, Austin! Wonderful first post you have here. Imagery is very strong. The break of day is a magical time that you have captured, via ducks.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest and keep on writing! Julie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Welcome to fan story, Austin! Wonderful first post you have here. Imagery is very strong. The break of day is a magical time that you have captured, via ducks.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest and keep on writing! Julie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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"Thank you very much for your kind words."
Comment from Yusita
Wow this is truly beautiful. With your words you've painted a mesmerizing scene. Great choice of words and lovely imagery. This was a delight to read.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Wow this is truly beautiful. With your words you've painted a mesmerizing scene. Great choice of words and lovely imagery. This was a delight to read.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much
Comment from royowen
The wonderful thing about a new day, it's very similar to New Year's Day because it's a new beginning, a fresh start, the mercies of God are new every morning, Lamentations 3:22-23, beautifully written welcome to fanstory, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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The wonderful thing about a new day, it's very similar to New Year's Day because it's a new beginning, a fresh start, the mercies of God are new every morning, Lamentations 3:22-23, beautifully written welcome to fanstory, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much
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Welcome
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Austin, your poem has good imagery. I can see the whole scene, including the break of day slowing turning into a new day. Good 5-7-5 format. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hello Austin, your poem has good imagery. I can see the whole scene, including the break of day slowing turning into a new day. Good 5-7-5 format. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much
