Take Care
Best to walk on a path with lots of people6 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt. That was wise advice from your Mother and smart that you took it! Blessings and best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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This is a very well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt. That was wise advice from your Mother and smart that you took it! Blessings and best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments and the six stars
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YOU ARE SO WELCOME!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A salient message that your mother was very wise to proffer! And even if you extend it into a metaphor for life it has value and weight. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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A salient message that your mother was very wise to proffer! And even if you extend it into a metaphor for life it has value and weight. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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I really appreciate your comments on my writing and thanks so much for the six stars
Comment from Julie Helms
Your mother gave good advice! Your poem fits the criteria of words and lines, and outlines a single theme. Great job, best of luck in the contest! Julie
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Your mother gave good advice! Your poem fits the criteria of words and lines, and outlines a single theme. Great job, best of luck in the contest! Julie
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank so much for your comments and six star review I really appreciate it.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
It is best not to walk alone or be where there are not alot of people. I liked your poem. Very nice job. We live is a different world. It is a shame.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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It is best not to walk alone or be where there are not alot of people. I liked your poem. Very nice job. We live is a different world. It is a shame.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I really appreciate it your comments and six star review Thank you
Comment from jessizero
I didn't know that the main road was supposed to be safer. I liked your poem. It fit the guidelines perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I didn't know that the main road was supposed to be safer. I liked your poem. It fit the guidelines perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thanks for you six star rating. More people, more cars and buses should be safer.
Comment from Yusita
I like how you used this prompt to share some wise and helpful advice. It's always safer to stay in well-lit areas, on the main road, where there are plenty of people, etc.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I like how you used this prompt to share some wise and helpful advice. It's always safer to stay in well-lit areas, on the main road, where there are plenty of people, etc.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for your comments and six star review