Fields
True love34 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
This is truly impressive, Lisa. Alas, no sixes are left. I am glad I went back in your portfolio and found it. Your heart is bared and the glory of the return of a loved one is being shared so well.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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This is truly impressive, Lisa. Alas, no sixes are left. I am glad I went back in your portfolio and found it. Your heart is bared and the glory of the return of a loved one is being shared so well.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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What a sweet review... Sadly so much of what we write is hidden in our port.........
I wish I could tell you which ones...but alas I can not.
Comment from BermyBye50
Lisa,
Congrats on your first place win in the Light and Sweet poem contest. Your title of your poem Fields is well reflected in your words. The story you tell with your words is creative, and romantic and flows easily when read. You've brilliantly captured in your words thoughts of true love and what it means. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Lisa,
Congrats on your first place win in the Light and Sweet poem contest. Your title of your poem Fields is well reflected in your words. The story you tell with your words is creative, and romantic and flows easily when read. You've brilliantly captured in your words thoughts of true love and what it means. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Hi there Eugene,
Thank you so much for the Congrats... I so appreciate it.
And, for taking the time to read and review my words. I am finally back to writing, so you will be seeing more of me. I have been dealing with a new knee... and that has been a challenge.
Lisa
Comment from QC Poet
Romantic Love story of a Someone who is waiting for their Sailor to return home from the sea. The only thing I like to know is what is a 10 count on a Rhyming Quarantine? Very interesting poem and I Wish You All The Luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Romantic Love story of a Someone who is waiting for their Sailor to return home from the sea. The only thing I like to know is what is a 10 count on a Rhyming Quarantine? Very interesting poem and I Wish You All The Luck in this contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you for asking 10 count just means ten syllables per line and a rhyming quatrain means there are 4 lines that rhyme
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem? I really appreciate it.
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Good morning,
I want to thank you again for your very nice review..and, since the Blind contest is over I can say that I won... So that is rather nice....
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem does describe the patient waiting that true love is willing to do. I like the fields of lavender as it conjures up both the senses of sight and smell. I also liked "taking deep breaths as night becomes morning." Best wishes in the contest!
Unless the language was all in 17th century English, I wouldn't use "thee" for the sake of rhyme.
Also, since the pronoun is the object of the preposition, it would be 'him'
awaiting patiently for only he.
It could be easily remedied to
awaiting for only him patiently
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Your poem does describe the patient waiting that true love is willing to do. I like the fields of lavender as it conjures up both the senses of sight and smell. I also liked "taking deep breaths as night becomes morning." Best wishes in the contest!
Unless the language was all in 17th century English, I wouldn't use "thee" for the sake of rhyme.
Also, since the pronoun is the object of the preposition, it would be 'him'
awaiting patiently for only he.
It could be easily remedied to
awaiting for only him patiently
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I will look into your helpful thoughts.
Thank you
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You still got my vote!
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You are a sweetheart.. whom ever you are.
Thank you!
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You are a sweetheart.. whom ever you are.
Thank you!
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Good morning,
Thought I would connect again to say that (now the contest is over) I won... Such fun...I do not think they announce the winners???
Lisa
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For the member-created contests, they don't announce except on the voting page. But CONGRATULATIONS!!
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Comment from June Sargent
True love is beautifully highlighted in this story of a woman waiting in suspense - worrying about her sailor at sea. Will he be returning? Or will he be lost? Passionate, yet gentle. A great entry for the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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True love is beautifully highlighted in this story of a woman waiting in suspense - worrying about her sailor at sea. Will he be returning? Or will he be lost? Passionate, yet gentle. A great entry for the contest!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Hi June,
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my Fields poem. I really appreciate that you really understood my poem. And thank you for saying that this is a great entry for the contest.
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Good morning dear June...now that the Blind contest is over I can let you know that I won... I do not think the winners are listed anywhere.
As I have not been posting for awhile it is quite nice to see I have won...Thank you so much for your review,
Lisasview
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a delightfully, soft, sweet expression of love, peppered with visions of lavender fields and waves of an open sea. Your creative choice of words is heartfelt and sincere, expressing true love. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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This is a delightfully, soft, sweet expression of love, peppered with visions of lavender fields and waves of an open sea. Your creative choice of words is heartfelt and sincere, expressing true love. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review I really appreciate it. Saying things like heartfelt and true love is what my poem is all about.
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Good morning, Now that the Blind contest is over I can say that I won...and I am quite happy as it has been a long time since I posted any poem..
Lisasview
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. Yes, true love will always return. Even if our partner dies, the true love remains and you can feel their presence. I enjoyed reading and this poem is every romantic.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. Yes, true love will always return. Even if our partner dies, the true love remains and you can feel their presence. I enjoyed reading and this poem is every romantic.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you dearest Barbara for taking the time to read and review my poem Fields.
You are so right even when your partner dies, true love remains.
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Good morning dear Barbara,
Since the Blind Contest is over I can say that I won and I am happy as it has been quite long time since I posted a poem.. Thank you again for you lovely review..Always appreciated.
Comment from karenina
It's a wonderful love poem...The tone seems heavier than "light and sweet" --
This may be my interpretation, granted.
The presentation is beautiful...
It's up to the voters now!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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It's a wonderful love poem...The tone seems heavier than "light and sweet" --
This may be my interpretation, granted.
The presentation is beautiful...
It's up to the voters now!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Oh now that is an interesting interpretation dear Karen.
I wrote it with the feeling that she was happy to see his return?. Safe and sound?Their love was true?
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Yes. It's me. I read into her worry, the angst of the fickle sea...
(Guess it's time for my Prozac!)
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Any interpretation is wonderful and so appreciated!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme tell a good story.
-A good job of connecting lavender fields to
the sea and waiting for your love to return.
-You show how worried you are, but then
the boat sails appear. You do a good job with your reaction.
-A very good concluding verse.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme tell a good story.
-A good job of connecting lavender fields to
the sea and waiting for your love to return.
-You show how worried you are, but then
the boat sails appear. You do a good job with your reaction.
-A very good concluding verse.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Wow, dear Pam... thank you for your amazing review... I love that you took each section and broke it down and reviewed it. This means a lot to me.
Thank you also for your good wishes for the contest.
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply. The style of my reviews came from someone when I first joined FS and I modified what she did. Since I don't know who you are, you might have know adewpearl (Brooke).
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No I don?t know her? but I do like the style?
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Thanks.
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Thrilled to say I actually won (now that the contest is over)
I have not posted in a while so this it is great to have won...knowing other writers liked my work...
Lisa
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Congratulations on the win. It is well deserved.
Comment from jaded831
Beautiful, my heart felt the fear. Everyone can relate. Maybe the circumstances are different, like waiting for a loved one during a blizzard or torrential rain storm, but the emotion is there. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Beautiful, my heart felt the fear. Everyone can relate. Maybe the circumstances are different, like waiting for a loved one during a blizzard or torrential rain storm, but the emotion is there. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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What a sweetheart you are to post such a wonderful review,
I so appreciate that you took the time to read my poem.
Thank you very much,
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Good morning, Since the Blind contest is over I just thought I would let you know that I won as I do not think that the winners are listed.. Well at least I do not see the listing anywhere?
Thank you again for your lovely review,
Lisasview
