Spring's Arrival
A sign of spring in central Texas6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I could feel the seeds waking up and growing to produce beautiful Blue Bonnets. They are gorgeous. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I could feel the seeds waking up and growing to produce beautiful Blue Bonnets. They are gorgeous. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I am eagerly awaiting the bluebonnets.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Sherry, this is perfect. The rhyme scheme is spot on, the flow is great and it made me smile. Cannot wait for those gorgeous signs of texas spring!
Blessing and hugs,
Deb
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Sherry, this is perfect. The rhyme scheme is spot on, the flow is great and it made me smile. Cannot wait for those gorgeous signs of texas spring!
Blessing and hugs,
Deb
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Deb. I'm glad I could make you smile.
Comment from pome lover
Are they out already? I live in San Antonio, but haven't been on the highway, lately, so haven't seen any. There are usually beautiful stretches of them off 410 going to Austin.
I remember when people would sit their babies in a patch of Blue Bonnets to take pictures of them. There should be signs posted about the dangers of rattlers in them, or on TV.
They are beautiful, and your poem is lovely.
Katharine
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Are they out already? I live in San Antonio, but haven't been on the highway, lately, so haven't seen any. There are usually beautiful stretches of them off 410 going to Austin.
I remember when people would sit their babies in a patch of Blue Bonnets to take pictures of them. There should be signs posted about the dangers of rattlers in them, or on TV.
They are beautiful, and your poem is lovely.
Katharine
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Oh no - not yet. I'm just missing them already. I used to live between Austin and Lockhart and we had a whole field of them about 2 minutes from our front door. Always got some great pictures of my foster dogs in that patch of them. I'm glad you took the time to read my poem, Katharine, and am glad you enjoyed it. Have a great week.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well written poem. Your first line opens the poem well. Each stanza connects with the others well. Your 3-6-9 syllable count is in good order. The picture compliments the picture nicely. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is a well written poem. Your first line opens the poem well. Each stanza connects with the others well. Your 3-6-9 syllable count is in good order. The picture compliments the picture nicely. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Spring's Arrival. Hoping you're having a great week.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well Spring there winter here, somewhere else lush vegetation covers the ground ,but I do feel and appreciate tge joy of seeing the rebirth of nature after hibernation.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Well Spring there winter here, somewhere else lush vegetation covers the ground ,but I do feel and appreciate tge joy of seeing the rebirth of nature after hibernation.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is almost time for them to bloom again, but I miss them most this time of year.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is almost time for them to bloom again, but I miss them most this time of year.
Comment from jim vecchio
So beautiful! If I could drive my wheelchair from Florida to Texas, I would do it in an instant! I love God's little harbingers of Spring that motivate us to the season of love and rebirth.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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So beautiful! If I could drive my wheelchair from Florida to Texas, I would do it in an instant! I love God's little harbingers of Spring that motivate us to the season of love and rebirth.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Even though I know they come back every year, I miss them when they quite blooming.
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Same here. And I miss my wife being the recipient of a bouquet.
