Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I couldn't help but smile as I read the ending of this poem. I could imagine those little ants under the umbrella plant attempting to stay dry. Wonderful poem and presentation.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

yes those california ants and definitely in hiding right now LOL
great rain-filled haiku - love the drops in the puddle picture
good imagistic satori and smooth flow...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Yes, we are having flood warnings every night.

Thank you very much, Shelley. Have a nice day (*÷*)

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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ants are so industrious and life must be a pretty big challenge for them.

Excellent imagery and a fun haiku to consider today. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Marival, even ants have to take a break
my sweet friend...and what a better time to
take one when the rain is covering the ground...
so good to see you sweet girl...

I love your poem...and love the picture...
very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words. Love you too.

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reply by l.raven on 09-Feb-2024

your so very welcome sweet girl...
love you...xxoo 💝🙏😊🤗🌼

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Are your images free on websites like Pinterest? I have noticed other people use them for their postings.
We have rain on the way, too, anyway, that's what I understand.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

the pictures are free on Pinterest, I use it all the time. We have a lot of rain in south California

Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's good that the worker ant can get a break but hope he doesn't drown. I guess the ants are good with helping each other form bridges to save each other. I like the "umbrella plant".

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024

Poor little ants deserve breaks too. Thank you big sister.

love
marival