Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Aiona,
This might be the true version of the story. But it was truly a men's world then and women couldn't rule alone. So Arthur became the King.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Have a nice weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024

Thanks for your review, Joan. I hope you keep writing and stay healthy too!

reply by dragonpoet on 02-Mar-2024

You're very welcome and thanks, Aiona.
Joan

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Dear Aiona, this was refreshingly creative and in a most difficult poetry form. Beautifully crafted and illustrated for a contest win, I suspect. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sal xos

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Hi, Sally. Thanks for the review. I hope you're doing well also.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I loved the Arthurian legends, and this was a great take on it. It was heartbreaking in a way. I am glad I read it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks for your review, jessizero. I always thought Morgan was such a sad character. Although she turns evil. :( Oh well! Wish things had gone better for her.