2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Go To Sleep".
5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem had a lullaby feeling with is. I enjoyed reading. I gave me a calm feeling as I read which a lullaby would do. Thank you for sharing this sweet presentation with us.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This poem had a lullaby feeling with is. I enjoyed reading. I gave me a calm feeling as I read which a lullaby would do. Thank you for sharing this sweet presentation with us.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Barbara
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Comment from shelley kaye
aww a sweet little bedtime song...
time for sleep
the waters are calm
close your eyes
and dream deep...
great gogyohka suite
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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aww a sweet little bedtime song...
time for sleep
the waters are calm
close your eyes
and dream deep...
great gogyohka suite
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Shelley
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Another cozy poem. I like that this had that feeling of a lullaby. The thought of catching a ride on a boat that will take you on a pleasant journey to where only sweet dreams are. Very settling. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Another cozy poem. I like that this had that feeling of a lullaby. The thought of catching a ride on a boat that will take you on a pleasant journey to where only sweet dreams are. Very settling. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen
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Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely lullaby! The waves of the sea always felt soothing and like a lullaby to me. I liked the assonance of the long "ee" sound in "sleep, deep, dream, sweetie..."
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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What a lovely lullaby! The waves of the sea always felt soothing and like a lullaby to me. I liked the assonance of the long "ee" sound in "sleep, deep, dream, sweetie..."
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are well.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Julie Helms
Beautiful. The way you string words together feels like a lullaby. The atmosphere is so soothing and secure (because you watch over her as she falls asleep). Lovely start to finish. Thanks for sharing. Julie
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Beautiful. The way you string words together feels like a lullaby. The atmosphere is so soothing and secure (because you watch over her as she falls asleep). Lovely start to finish. Thanks for sharing. Julie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie, I hope you are well.
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