Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This poem had a lullaby feeling with is. I enjoyed reading. I gave me a calm feeling as I read which a lullaby would do. Thank you for sharing this sweet presentation with us.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you, Barbara

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aww a sweet little bedtime song...

time for sleep
the waters are calm
close your eyes
and dream deep...

great gogyohka suite
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you, Shelley

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Another cozy poem. I like that this had that feeling of a lullaby. The thought of catching a ride on a boat that will take you on a pleasant journey to where only sweet dreams are. Very settling. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you, Gretchen

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a lovely lullaby! The waves of the sea always felt soothing and like a lullaby to me. I liked the assonance of the long "ee" sound in "sleep, deep, dream, sweetie..."

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are well.

Love,

Marival

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Beautiful. The way you string words together feels like a lullaby. The atmosphere is so soothing and secure (because you watch over her as she falls asleep). Lovely start to finish. Thanks for sharing. Julie

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Julie, I hope you are well.

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