First Light
1/1/2/12 Poem3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi AP,
This is a perfect mixture of words and artwork. It has good personification and strong line breaks.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
Hi AP,
This is a perfect mixture of words and artwork. It has good personification and strong line breaks.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for your time Joan - Bless
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You are most welcome on both accournts, AP.
Joan
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. I am both a morning person and a night person; I never sleep lol. Morning have such a beautiful and hopeful feeling, whether sunny or rainy but, sunny morning truly motivate me. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
Excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. I am both a morning person and a night person; I never sleep lol. Morning have such a beautiful and hopeful feeling, whether sunny or rainy but, sunny morning truly motivate me. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Alex for your excellent review and for your time - Bless
Comment from RodG
Ah, I wish it was a Spring morning today. I would love to see those sun rays "bringing color" to a bright red rose. And you chose a gorgeous photograph to accompany your poem. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
Ah, I wish it was a Spring morning today. I would love to see those sun rays "bringing color" to a bright red rose. And you chose a gorgeous photograph to accompany your poem. Rod
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Rod for your kind review and for your time! Bless