Poorly Pig
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What a cute pig and what a fun poem. I never thought of a pig with laryngitis, but when they get in full voice complaining about something, it would be a good thing for them to get because they can be amazingly loud.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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What a cute pig and what a fun poem. I never thought of a pig with laryngitis, but when they get in full voice complaining about something, it would be a good thing for them to get because they can be amazingly loud.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Carol, for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That's funny! Thanks for the humorous take on that cute painting of a pig. My sister-in-law actually had two very large pet pigs who were very smart and figured out to open the fridge door! Laryngitis would not have stopped them. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Lol. That's funny! Thanks for the humorous take on that cute painting of a pig. My sister-in-law actually had two very large pet pigs who were very smart and figured out to open the fridge door! Laryngitis would not have stopped them. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Helen, for your kind and supportive review! Loved your comments.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Debbie,
this is certainly an original offering. I used to think I had a good imagination, but obviously I haven't been exposed enough to all the ultra talented people that are found on this site. I wonder, do pigs get laryngitis? I should look it up I guess. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Hello Debbie,
this is certainly an original offering. I used to think I had a good imagination, but obviously I haven't been exposed enough to all the ultra talented people that are found on this site. I wonder, do pigs get laryngitis? I should look it up I guess. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Tom, for your kind and thoughtful review. Apparently, animals do suffer from laryngeal disorders, well at least my pig does:))
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good poem done with this format. I love the alliteration. I didn't know pigs got laryngitis. I guess any creature can, but it shouldn't take much out of vocal cords to grunt.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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This is a good poem done with this format. I love the alliteration. I didn't know pigs got laryngitis. I guess any creature can, but it shouldn't take much out of vocal cords to grunt.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Beth! Yes, laryngeal disorders do affect animals:)
Comment from Navada
I really enjoyed your use of alliteration and the phrase "disarmingly disgruntled" is really charming! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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I really enjoyed your use of alliteration and the phrase "disarmingly disgruntled" is really charming! Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Navada! Greatly appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a cute picture that goes with a witty poem.
I would guess he would feel bad; I like the alliteration and consonance in
the last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Hi
This is a cute picture that goes with a witty poem.
I would guess he would feel bad; I like the alliteration and consonance in
the last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the weekend
Joan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan, for your lovely, thoughtful review! As ever, your thoughts are greatly appreciated.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A perfect piggy picture for a perfect piggy poem. Do I get some points for alliteration? This is a clever, playful poem, that simply delights. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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A perfect piggy picture for a perfect piggy poem. Do I get some points for alliteration? This is a clever, playful poem, that simply delights. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Ginda, for your lovely, thoughtful review. Always points for alliteration:))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with this post, a disgruntled pig, love the pun in this cleverly penned poem, a humorous presentation and a worthy entry for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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You made me smile with this post, a disgruntled pig, love the pun in this cleverly penned poem, a humorous presentation and a worthy entry for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly! Your kind thoughts are always appreciated.
Comment from jmdg1954
Hmph, I wonder which nursery rhyme little piggy this one was. Must've been the one who stayed home, you know, since it had laryngitis.
Your short poem gave me a smile. You should do more of these!
Cheers from across the pond.
John
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Hmph, I wonder which nursery rhyme little piggy this one was. Must've been the one who stayed home, you know, since it had laryngitis.
Your short poem gave me a smile. You should do more of these!
Cheers from across the pond.
John
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, John, for your lovely, humorous review! Greatly appreciated.
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You are quite welcome!
If you have a chance, can you send me the ?how to include a YouTube video? when I post?
Much appreciated?
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Yes of course. Go into You Tube, select, press 'share' then 'embed', press 'copy'. Then go to your post in 'edit,' put cursor where you want video to go, then press your 'paste' key (control and 'v') and bingo! If I can do it, anyone can:)
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Uh-hum?. My kids laugh at me because I?m so inept.
Sounds easy? thank you
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Let me know if you have any problems.
Comment from Jacob1395
It sounds like a really uncomfortable thing to have. I loved the imagery in this piece Debi and I thought you did an excellent job of bringing your poem to life and making it engaging. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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It sounds like a really uncomfortable thing to have. I loved the imagery in this piece Debi and I thought you did an excellent job of bringing your poem to life and making it engaging. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Jacob, for this very kind review!
