Poorly Pig
Oink-less38 total reviews
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Been there, done that! Laryngitis sucks, so I totally feel for the poor, poorly piggy. Such a cute little poem with so few syllables. Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Been there, done that! Laryngitis sucks, so I totally feel for the poor, poorly piggy. Such a cute little poem with so few syllables. Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review! Take care Debbie
Comment from Dawn Munro
Okay, yer killin' me with the assonance -- "disarmingly disgruntled"! Hahahaha! A poor oinker who lost his oink.
What a charming poem! I am going to leave FanStory this morning with a huge smile! :))
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Okay, yer killin' me with the assonance -- "disarmingly disgruntled"! Hahahaha! A poor oinker who lost his oink.
What a charming poem! I am going to leave FanStory this morning with a huge smile! :))
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Deborah, for your lovely review! I think he's more his old self again now. Some reviewers wished his oink never to return:) Debbie
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Hahahaha! Poor pig. People want him mute. Sad, just sad. (Lol)
(My pleasure -- I'm grinning again, being reminded of this post.)
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was such a fun poem to read. I loved the use of the letter d repeatedly. It was quick paced and just silly enough to make me laugh. Very well written and enjoyable. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This was such a fun poem to read. I loved the use of the letter d repeatedly. It was quick paced and just silly enough to make me laugh. Very well written and enjoyable. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Gretchen, for this kind and supportive review which I greatly appreciate! Debbie
Comment from LJbutterfly
You creatively met the challenge of this unusual poetry prompt. Your brief story about a poor pig who lost his voice is quite humorous. Your artwork compliments the story. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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You creatively met the challenge of this unusual poetry prompt. Your brief story about a poor pig who lost his voice is quite humorous. Your artwork compliments the story. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A pig that has no voice is not good for even grunting.
But pigs have valves that are used for medical reasons. They save lives by using the valves for heart surgery.
We had pigs years ago and were sold for good reasons.
I wonder if this image pig got shots so he or she stays well.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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A pig that has no voice is not good for even grunting.
But pigs have valves that are used for medical reasons. They save lives by using the valves for heart surgery.
We had pigs years ago and were sold for good reasons.
I wonder if this image pig got shots so he or she stays well.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from Deborah Dybowski
Well done with accomplishing the task of writing a 1-1-2-12 poem and in the process you have a humorous story of poor pig who is disgruntled because of having laryngitis.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Well done with accomplishing the task of writing a 1-1-2-12 poem and in the process you have a humorous story of poor pig who is disgruntled because of having laryngitis.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Deborah, for this kind review! Much appreciated.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, the poor pig, fancy losing his oink! Lol. I had laryngitis when I was a child, I swear my parents were happy!!
You've done an amazing job with this 1-1-2-12 contest entry, the words fit perfectly, and it is so funny! I also liked your use of aliteration, with 'poor pig' and 'disarmingly disgruntled' very well done. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Aww, the poor pig, fancy losing his oink! Lol. I had laryngitis when I was a child, I swear my parents were happy!!
You've done an amazing job with this 1-1-2-12 contest entry, the words fit perfectly, and it is so funny! I also liked your use of aliteration, with 'poor pig' and 'disarmingly disgruntled' very well done. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from Debra White
LOL!
I enjoyed this Debbie :)
Bless the pig with his poorly larynx!
Generous use of alliteration and nicely presented.
Perfect syllable count for the writing prompt. Good luck!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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LOL!
I enjoyed this Debbie :)
Bless the pig with his poorly larynx!
Generous use of alliteration and nicely presented.
Perfect syllable count for the writing prompt. Good luck!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Debra, for your kind and thoughtful review! It's supposed to be blind but FS messed it up so I won't say any more.
Comment from jenintorre
Hi mystery writer
I really like this. Such a clever play on words and a really good entry for the competition. I love the artwork. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Hi mystery writer
I really like this. Such a clever play on words and a really good entry for the competition. I love the artwork. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Jen, for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very clever play on words, and the last line was very humorous. Poor little pig. I liked the image as well. Well done. Sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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That is a very clever play on words, and the last line was very humorous. Poor little pig. I liked the image as well. Well done. Sending good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for your kind and thoughtful review!
