Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a very good poem for the challenge. Your rhyming is good and it depicts what happens when people meet and fall in love. They do gravitate toward each other. Well done! Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thank you, Alex. My first attempt at this style

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

This is a good shorty, makes sense and it fits the challenge perfectly. I like that it is a positive one. Not, mate, the one I hate, fate. Best of luck with the contest! Julie

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

Thanks, Julie